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5.假设你是李华.正在你校就读的美国交换生汤姆在校园网上发帖,想找一个人作为假期游览北京的导游.请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表明意愿;
2.说明理由.
注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Tom,
I learned from your post that you are looking for a guide for your trip to Beijing during the vacation.
                                                              
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一封电子邮件.表达自己想当导游的意愿并说明理由,写作时人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.写作要点:1.表明意愿  2.说明理由 
 亮点说明  be willing to  愿意做      public transportation公共交通  tourist attractions旅游景点    confident 自信的   have a good command of English 精通英语

解答 Dear Tom,
    I learned from your post that you are looking for a guide for your trip to Beijing during the vacation.I'm willing to guide you around the city.(表明意愿)
    I have been living in Beijing since I was born,so I know this city very well,including its public transportation,tourist attractions and local snacks.(高级句型)As I am very interested in the history and culture of Beijing,I have been to many famous tourist sports several times and I know them well,so I'm confident that I can give you a good introduction to them.(高级句型)In addition,I have a good command of English and am always ready enough to help you.(高级句型)(说明理由)
    Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Hua

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁.本文是议论文. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.

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