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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Thomas, a famous writer, who lives just next door to me. He is always ready to help others, but he enjoys great popularity in the neighborhood.

He often teaches us how to write stories and encourage us to try writing something about myself. He said he was born in the poor family. As a kid, he has a dream to become a famous writer. He worked hardly and overcame a great many difficulty. At last, he entered a famous university and majored Chinese language and culture. Now, his works is very popular at home and abroad.

【答案】第一处:去掉who

第二处:but→ and

第三处:encourage→ encourages

第四处:myself→ ourselves

第五处:the→ a

第六处:has→ had

第七处:hardly→ hard

第八处:difficulty→ difficulties

第九处:majored后加in

第十处:is→ are

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文,作者介绍了自己的邻居托马斯的作家之路。

第一处:考查定语从句。句意:托马斯是一位著名的作家,住在我隔壁。分析句子结构,可知此处是一个简单句(Thomas是主语 a famous writer是同位语,lives是谓语),而不是非限定性定语从句,who是多余的,故去掉who

第二处:考查连词。句意:他总是乐于助人,在邻居中很受欢迎。根据句意,可知前后是并列,而非转折关系,故but改为and

第三处:考查主谓一致。句意:他经常教我们如何写故事,并鼓励我们尝试写一些关于自己的东西。描述经常或反复发生的动作,用一般现在时。主语是He,谓语动词用第三人称单数,故encourage改为encourages

第四处:考查代词。句意同上,根据句意,可知此处表示“我们自己”,而不是“我自己”,故myself改为ourselves

第五处:考查冠词。句意:他说他出生在一个贫穷的家庭。family是可数名词,根据句意,可知此处泛指一个贫困家庭,应该用不定冠词修饰,poor的发音以辅音音素开头,故the改为a

第六处:考查时态。句意:小时候,他梦想成为一位著名作家。陈述的是过去的事情,应该用一般过去时,故has改为had

第七处:考查副词。句意:他努力工作,克服了许多困难。hard表示努力地hardly表示几乎不,根据句意,可知此处用前者,故hardly改为hard

第八处:考查名词的数。句意同上,a great many修饰可数名词复数,故difficulty改为difficulties

第九处:考查固定短语。句意:最后,他进入了一所著名的大学,主修汉语言文化。major in是固定短语,表示主修,故majored后加in

第十处:考查主谓一致。句意:现在,他的作品在国内外很受欢迎。主语是his works,谓语动词用复数,故is改为are

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