Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1. 剧情简介；

2. 指导内容；

3. 商定时间地点。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 结束语已为你写好。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。

结构：总分总法

第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient

第三步：连词成句

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改