Question

【题目】作为一名高三学生的你，明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。

1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；

2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；

3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；

4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意：

1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. ___________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在写完全文后，还需要 通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。本篇文章需要注意前三个要点必须齐全，最后一个可以自由发挥。

【亮点说明】本篇文章要点齐全，而且使用了恰当的列举性词汇，比如Firstly、Secondly、Above all等，使文章结构更加清晰。除此之外，文章还使用了虚拟语气，如Without their help and advice, my life would be different。以及定语从句如it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood。文章还引用了谚语增加了文章的感染力，如No pains, no gains以及time and tide wait for no men。