文中菜有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下面画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词,2．只允许修改10处.多者不计分．Dear Mr．and Mrs．William 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

题目内容

10．文中菜有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mr．and Mrs．William．
I've learned that you are interested in Beijing Opera，so I've come to give you two ticket for tomorrow evening's Beijing Opera at Mei Lanfang Theater．But it's real a pity that you happened to be out．So I have to leave the tickets with this note．The opera will be put on by some amous actors or actresses．He is well worth watching．By the way，I've read the two books you lent me，that are very interested．This week，I am busy review my lessons in order to pass the final exams．I'm afraid of that I can't go to the Opera togehter with you．
I hope you will have good time．
Yours，
Li Ming．

分析这是一张李明写给William夫妇的便条；里面的内容包括：他留下这张便条的原因；对那部即将上演的京剧做了简单的介绍；提到了William夫妇借给他读的那两本有趣的书；并说明了自己不能一起去看戏的原因等．

解答 Dear Mr．and Mrs．William．
I've learned that you are interested in Beijing Opera，so I've come
to give you two ticket for tomorrow evening's Beijing Opera at
                         tickets
Mei Lanfang Theater．But it's real a pity that you happened to be
                                            really                       happen
out．So I have to leave the tickets with this note．The  opera will
be put on by some famous actors or actresses．He is well worth
                                               and                 It
watching．By the way，I've read the two books you lent me，that
                                                                                         which
are very interested．This week，I am busy review my lessons in order
           interesting                                   reviewing
to pass the final exams．I'm afraid of that I can't go to the Opera
                                                 去掉of
togehter with you．
I hope you will have∧good time．
                             a
Yours，
Li Ming

答案：
1．将ticket改为tickets     考查名词的单复数   此处指的是两张京剧票，故用名词的复数形式tickets；
2．将real改为really     考查副词   此处用来修饰系动词is，故用副词really；
3．将happened改为happen 考查时态  根据上下文使用了一般现在时可知，本文说明的是他现在的情况，即：现在来给他们送票，他们碰巧不在，故此处也应使用一般现在时，故用happen；
4．将or改为and    考查连词   本句的意思是：这部京剧将由著名的男演员和女演员共同出演，此处表示的是并列关系，而不是表示转折，故用and；
5．将He改为It   考查人称代词   本句是意思是：这部京剧值得观看，故此处的主语指的应是：这部戏剧，故用It；
6．将that改为which      考查关系代词根据句意以及此处之前的逗号可知，本句是非限定性定语从句，此处代指的是先行词the two books，由于that不能用于非限定性定语从句中，故用关系代词which；
7．将interested改为interesting   考查现在分词   此处在句中修饰the two books（指物），故用现在分词interesting；
8．将review 改为reviewing   考查固定短语"be busy doing sth．"意为：忙于做某事；故用reviewing；
9．去掉of   考查介词由于短语be afraid of 之后只能接单个的单词或短语，而此处是一个that从句，故去掉of；
10．在good之前加a   考查固定短语"have a good time"意为：过得愉快，故在good之前加a．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

练习册系列答案

相关题目

Parents annoyed by their children’s picky eating habits have taken to social media to share a host of creative ways to deal with them in a new thread gaining popularity online. In these lunch box notes posted onto sites, mothers and fathers have used threats, persuasion and even little white lies to talk their youngsters into finishing their sandwiches.

One talented father created the tag “Dadfact” in an effort to persuade his child into eating their sandwiches using information that might not be completely reliable. He scribbled on a napkin, “Every time you don’t eat your sandwich a unicorn(独角兽) dies Dadfact Love, Dad”. A further technique from a separate note was a drawing of a scary monster, ordering the little one to, “Eat your food!”

Everyone knows coming to terms with bread crusts is a difficult job. One parent’s inspiring note encouraged their child to leave the world of crustless sandwiches behind. They wrote, “I left the crusts on. Today is the first day of the rest of your life.”

Another cheered on their child with a note which read, “You can do it! Love yourself.” A father appeared to be laying down the law when he wrote, “New rule: I will keep packing this sandwich until you eat it. Good luck. Love, Dad.”

One youngster Julian retorted (反驳) with a handwritten moan of his own. When his mother wrote to him, saying, “Dear Julian, have a great day, love Mom”, he replied simply on the same piece of paper, in big letter, “I will not.”

But cheery parents shared more positive feelings on post— it’s attached to their children’s lunch. A mother wrote, “Have a great day! I love you.” Another simply put, “You are my sunshine.”

Other parents shared jokes in their children’s lunchbox to perk them up during the day. One included, “When do astronauts eat? At launch time.” And another shared, “Why did the student eat his homework? Because the teacher said it’s a piece of cake.”

1.What does the underlined phrase “perk...up” mean in the last paragraph?

A. make active B. make feel proud

C. give promise D. give praise

2.By saying “Every time you don’t eat your sandwich a unicorn dies Dadfact Love, Dad”, the parents are actually giving their children ________.

A. persuasion. B. encouragement.

C. threats. D. white lies.

3.Most parents leave notes in their children’s lunch boxes by _____________.

A. drawing pictures B. playing word games

C. quoting sayings D. using further technique

4.How do the children respond to the notes according to the passage?

A. The children are very particular about the notes.

B. The children are greatly motivated by the encouraging notes.