Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学的张华，班里从外地转来一名学生李明，他一时无法融入新的集体当中，感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信。

1. 帮他分析原因 2. 给他提出建议 3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意：词数120左右（开头已给出，不算在字数内。）

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear LiMing,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That's because you are new here and people don't know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people's views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I'm always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、仔细研读题目所给信息，不要误解信息，也不要漏掉要点，明确自己是以哪个身份来写这封信。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构，符合书信口吻和语气。词汇短语丰富，如having trouble communicating with，your classmates' likes and dislikes。还用到了first、second和the last but not least，结构分明，很有层次感。