题目内容
【题目】每个人都对自己的未来充满期待,十年后的你会过着什么样的生活呢?请以“My Life in the Future”为题,对你的未来生活进行展望。
要点包括:
1.你可能生活的城市及理由;
2.你可能从事的工作及理由;
3.你的家庭状况;
4.为未来的美好生活而努力。
注意:1.词数:120左右;
2.可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】My Life in the Future
To be honest, I have great hopes for my future and I’d like to share my ideal life in ten years with you.
It’s probable that I will live in Guangzhou, one of my favorite cities, because I prefer the warm and mild climate and I’m also eager for the fast-paced life there. I have a dream that a good many people will live in the apartments designed by me in the future, as a result, architecture must be my major and I’m likely to be an architect then. Besides, I will be leading a happy and harmonious life. Certainly it will be a great pleasure to get around the world with my family members.
The beautiful future life is just around the corner, we should spare no effort to make our dreams come true.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,要求写一篇介绍自己未来生活的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略,动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,主要用一般将来时态进行叙述,这方面需要注意的问题比较少。写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】
本文要点齐全,语句衔接紧密,文章布局合理,文中使用高级词汇和句子。To be honest, I have great hopes for my future动词不定式的独立成分运用巧妙;It’s probable that I will live in Guangzhou, one of my favorite cities句中使用it做形式主语,that主语从句做真正的主语;because I prefer the warm and mild climate句中使用原因状语从句;I have a dream that a good many people will live in the apartments designed by me in the future,在句中that引导同位语从句;另外,as a result, Besides, just around the corner, spare no effort等的运用为文章增色添彩。