此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾 √ ,如有错误 .则按下列情况改正: 该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词.并也用斜线划掉．该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线.在该行右边横线上写� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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11．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾"√"；如有错误（每行只有一处错），则按下列情况改正：
   该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
    该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
    该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
     注意：原行没有错的不要改．
    Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，66．birthday改为birthdays
but the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that                    67．that改为which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the    68．√
birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from                     69．usual改为usually
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or                   70．with去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday                     7l．showing改为show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can             72．they改为it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a                            73．doing改为done
bunch of flowers or cook delicious meal for our mothers on that day.74．加a
Thus，we express our thanks to our parents in return to their love.75．to改为for．

分析中国的学生庆祝生日的方式各异，当最常见的是举办生日聚会．聚会上朋友们一起开怀畅饮，唱歌跳舞．还可以收到别人的礼物和祝福．有时，父母会准备丰盛的晚餐或蛋糕来表达对孩子的爱．因为生日是一个人生活当中重要的活动之一，可以用更有意义的方式来庆祝．例如，可以买束花或给父母做一顿饭来表达我们对他们爱的回报．

解答 Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，
                                               birthdays
but the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that
                                                                                    which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the

birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from
                     usually
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or
                                                          去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday
              show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can
                                                                                      it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a
     done
bunch of flowers or cook∧delicious meal for our mothers on that day．
                                    加a
Thus，we express our thanks to our parents in return to their love．
                                                                              for
1．birthday改为birthdays．句意表达的是复数．
2．that改为which．该句是一个非限制性定语从句，修饰名词party，介词后不能用that；at which相当于where．
3．正确．
4．usual改为usually．修饰动词要用副词．
5．with去掉．prepare是及物动词，不需要加介词．
6．showing改为show．句中to show是目的状语，要用动词不定式．
7．they改为it．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是birthday celebration．
8．doing改为done．句意表达的是被动．
9．加a．a delicious meal一顿可口的饭．
10．to改为for．句意表达的是目的，return to是归还的意思．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．