Question

13．假设你是某中学高一年级学生赵明，昨天你和同学们一起听了一场讲座．请根据下面表中信息，完成一篇短文，并向校刊投稿．
    注：1．讲座内容至少涉及两点．
    2．词数80-100．
    3．开头已给出．
Lecturer          Jing Haipeng（an astronaut）
Topic             The Successful Launch of ShenzhouⅨ（Shenzhou-9 manned spacecraft）
Details*The most exciting moment； when the spaceship was lifting off，…
*The most historic event； the first female astronaut Liu Yang
*The most interesting experience； zero gravity
Students'activity Ask many questions about the space travel
My feelings       …
My classmates and I attended a special lecture yesterday．
                                                                            

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely．
高分句型二：
we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers，which can make the two sides of us beneficial．
句型一 They think that only in this way can they express their real…该句中think后面跟一个宾语从句，宾语从句中，当only 位于句首修饰介词短语时，从句要使用部分倒装，即主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换：can they express their real
句型二 which can make the two sides of us beneficial．该句是一个由which引导的费限制性定语，which在从句中作主语，替代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school's post bar．（提出观点）Different students have various opinions on it．Here are their words：
   A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently．Besides，it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others，especially our loved teachers．As a senior student，we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers．（不赞同的原因）
   There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors．They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely．（高分句型一）On the other hand，if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face，it will bring much embarrass to our teachers．（赞同理由）
   In my opinion，we shouldn't stab our teacher in the back； we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers，which can make the two sides of us beneficial．（高分句型二）（个人观点）

点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达，写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息，尽量要将其所列内容清楚表达；另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇，用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清楚．