Question

11．假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言．请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿：
1．过去对成年的向往；
2．现在的感受和认识；
3．将来的目标及措施．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．发言稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）．
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped thatI could grow up as soon as possible so thatI could have whateverI wanted and do whateverI liked．NowIama grown-up，butI find things do not go asI expected．AlthoughIcan enjoy more freedom，at the same timeI realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also moreresponsibilities．I hopeto domore for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．To reach the goal，I must first try my bestto pass the college entrance examination and enter a gooduniversity．
Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked
作为一个孩子，我总是希望我能尽快成长，让我做什么我想做什么我喜欢做的．
高分句型二：
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．
为了达到这个目标，我必须尽我最大的努力通过高考，进入一所好的大学．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on being a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked（高分句型一）．Now I am a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected．Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities．I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university（高分句型二）．
Thank you for your listening

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．