Question

【题目】以“The Way to Keep Healthy”为题

内容如下：1.有益：新鲜水果和蔬菜，有规律的锻炼，每天睡眠应约八小时；2. 有害：过量的糖果和咖啡，香烟，工作过度劳累

Answer 1

【答案】

It is very important for us to keep healthy in our everyday life. But how? Here are some advice for you to follow.

First, you should have a healthy diet. It’s necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables, because they contain all kinds of vitamin that you need every day. But do not eat too much fat, such as cheese, butter or anything too fatty. Too many sweets can do harm to your teeth. So you had better not eat too many sweets or chocolates and keep off coffee.

Good habits can help you keep fit. Doing regular exercise is certainly a good way to ensure the healthy state of your body. After a day’s work, an eight-hour sleep is needed. And avoid working or studying too hard. Remember smoking can damage your health, so never smoke.

【解析】

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