Question

【题目】书面表达

你校英语俱乐部举行征文大赛，要求参赛学生介绍一件自己珍藏的物品（如书信、礼物、照片等）。请你用英文写一篇字数为100-120的参赛稿，内容应包括：

1. 如何得到这件物品；

2. 这件物品对于你的意义。

注意: 短文中，不得以任何形式透露本人和学校等真实信息。

Answer 1

【答案】

When it comes to the thing that I treasure most, jumping into my mind is a book Three days to see. It was a gift from mother, who is always willing to help me. There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study suffered a lot. Instead of scolding me, Mother gave me a book and asked me to read it. Hardly had I finished a few pages when I was greatly attracted by Helen Keller. Despite her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieved a lot. It was her determination and courage that made her a huge success.

When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also accomplish what Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ears whenever I see the book, inspiring me to face the challenge in life.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题：介绍一件自己珍藏的物品，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。常规写法，本文首先应该点明这件物品。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：When it comes to当谈到....，jumping into跳入，was addicted to沉溺于，Because of因为，Instead of代替，abandon抛弃，ring in，本文句式多变the thing that I treasure most定语从句，jumping into my mind is a book倒装句，who is always willing to help me定于从句，Hardly had I finished a few pages when I was greatly attracted by Helen Keller倒装句，It was her determination and courage that made her a huge success.强调句。