题目内容
5.一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我",请根据下列提示并适当发挥想象,展望未来的生活.1.家庭:与现在不同.XXX岁,有自己的家庭,也许有一个可爱的孩子.
2.工作:在电脑公司担任程序设计员,喜欢这份工作并且与同事相处融洽.
3.业余生活…(需补充3项内容).
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头语已为你写好.
I think my life will be very different in ten years.
分析 高分句型一)I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
该句型imagine后加一个宾语从句,从句中用what引导,作为be like 的宾语,意思是将来生活会是什么样子.
(高分句型二)I'll do a good job in whatever I do.
介词in后加一个宾语从句,whatever等于anything that,意思是无论我做什么.
本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time,In a word,such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.
解答 One Possible Version:
(高分句型一)I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.(高分句型二)I'll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I'll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I'll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
A. | agreed | B. | signed | C. | made | D. | suggested |
On the day of the race,I (44)Aup with about 30,000other runners.The faster runners were at the (45)C,while slower runners like me were (46)Cfurther back.In that way,the professional runners and club runners were not(47)Bdown by the amateurs.
At first,there were so many(48)Dclose together that we were almost falling(49)Beach other.We could(50)Arun very slowly but that was a good thing because it meant that we didn't rush off to quickly.Gradually the runners (51)Dout and there was more space.There were thousands of people watching us along the route and they(52)Cand clapped everyone,even the slowest runner.It was wonderful.
For the first 10km I felt very happy and my legs felt very (53)C.However,at 15km,I got a pain in my (54)Aand running became difficult,but I kept going and the pain disappeared.At the 30km(55)C,I felt extremely tried,and wanted to stop,but I kept on going.I (56)Banother 3km and then I began to feel better again.
When I finished 35km,I knew I was going to get to the end of the course.(57)D,that confidence made me feel lighter and faster and it seemed as if my legs(58)Cover the last few kilometers.Finally I came round the last(59)Aand saw the finishing line.I finished the race in just under four hours.The winner had completed the race in 2hours and 10minutes,but I didn't(60)D!I had run 42km and completed my first marathon!
41.A.So | B.Or | C.But | D.And |
42.A.hoped | B.feared | C.heard | D.realized |
43.A.disappointed | B.determined | C.discouraged | D.devoted |
44.A.lined | B.got | C.kept | D.made |
45.A.back | B.center | C.front | D.end |
46.A.pushed | B.prevented | C.placed | D.forced |
47.A.fell | B.slowed | C.looked | D.pulled |
48.A.judges | B.viewers | C.photographers | D.runners |
49.A.down | B.over | C.off | D.behind |
50.A.only | B.even | C.also | D.still |
51.A.held | B.broke | C.gave | D.spread |
52.A.delighted | B.calmed | C.cheered | D.comforted |
53.A.heavy | B.weak | C.comfortable | D.convenient |
54.A.side | B.memory | C.face | D.dream |
55.A.remark | B.stop | C.sign | D.break |
56.A.took | B.covered | C.gained | D.put |
57.A.Rather | B.However | C.Instead | D.Somehow |
58.A.slipped | B.jumped | C.flew | D.turned |
59.A.bend | B.route | C.part | D.road |
60.A.doubt | B.agree | C.win | D.care. |
In 2003,several(46)Bdestroyed the city of San Diego.All the news,stories of families who had lost their homes(47)Dthe citizens.I felt so sorry for all of those families,(48)Aconsidering that I could some day be one of them.
That day came on October 22,2007,without(49)BOur family had evacuated(撤离) along with a half million people as the Witch Creek Fire(50) Ashes were filling everywhere creating a thick dark cloud that(51)Athe sun.More than 1,700homes were burnt to the ground(52)Bfire fighters fought long and hard to save our houses,the force of the wind was(53).Later that night,we received a phone call with the bad news:our(54)Ahad been burnt to the ground.After a week of disbelief,I started (55)Chow much I had lost.
Long before these days of destruction,our family(56)Da trip to India.Although we were still in crisis(危机)mode,we started on our long journey to this(57)Dplace.On top of being stressed and discouraged,India gave me a whole new perspective(视角).Poverty,pollution,and overpopulation were all(58)Bus.The astonishing sights only made me(59)Ceverything I had even more.
Fortunately,through(60)Amy house and traveling to India,I have realized that being appreciative is one of the keys to a happy and fulfilling life.
41.A.suffered | B.witnessed | C.enjoyed | D.accepted |
42.A satisfying | B.challenging | C.demanding | D.missing |
43.A.Hopefully | B.Personally | C.Luckily | D.Obviously |
44.A.adventure | B.1ife | C.journey | D.position |
45.A.while | B.before | C.unless | D.since |
46.A.battles | B.fires | C.floods | D.earthquakes |
47.A.excited | B.disappointed | C.inspired | D.frightened |
48.A.never | B.always | C..regularly | D.meanwhile |
49.A hesitation | B.warning | C.doubt | D.complaint |
50.A.died away | B.went on | C.broke out | D.went off |
51.A.covered | B.reflected | C.surrounded | D.prevented |
52.A.Because | B.Although | C.Once | D.After |
53.A.imaginable | B.accessible | C.impossible | D.unstoppable |
54.A.house | B.family | C.company | D.country |
55.A.mention | B.forget | C.realize | D.survey |
56.A.declared | B.guaranteed | C.cancelled | D.planned |
57.A.familiar | B.wealthy | C.generous | D.foreign |
58.A.for | B.around | C.among | D.beyond |
59.A.confuse | B.desert | C.appreciate | D.protect |
60.A.losing | B.rebuilding | C.damaging | D.decorating. |
A. | to hold | B. | to be held | C. | held | D. | being held |