题目内容
10.假定你是李华,正在英国留学,你校"汉语文化俱乐部"将招聘会员.请你给负责人Mike写封自荐信.内容包括:1.个人简介(姓名、年龄、国籍等);
2.成长经历;
3.个人才艺:(书法、唐诗等).
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mike,
I am writing to apply to join the Chinese Culture Club.
I am Li Hua,18 years old.I come from China.I am enthusiastic and progressive.Every year I got the first grade scholarship.I was born and grew up in China so I know quite a lot about Chinese culture.(高分句型一)I'm good at Chinese handwriting.Besides,I have learned many poems written in Tang Dynasty,which are famous all over the world.(高分句型二)
I am sure that I am the ideal person for the club.I would appreciate it if you could accept me.(高分句型三)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,正在英国留学,你校"汉语文化俱乐部"将招聘会员.请你给负责人Mike写封自荐信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:个人简介(姓名、年龄、国籍等);成长经历;个人才艺:(书法、唐诗等). 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:apply to 申请;come from来自;grow up成长;be good at 擅长;Besides另外;all over the world全世界;
I was born and grew up in China so I know quite a lot about Chinese culture.(高分句型一)
Besides,I have learned many poems written in Tang Dynasty,which are famous all over the world.(高分句型二)
I would appreciate it if you could accept me.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mike,
I am writing to apply to join the Chinese Culture Club.
I am Li Hua,18 years old.I come from China.I am enthusiastic and progressive.Every year I got the first grade scholarship.I was born and grew up in China so I know quite a lot about Chinese culture.(高分句型一)I'm good at Chinese handwriting.Besides,I have learned many poems written in Tang Dynasty,which are famous all over the world.(高分句型二)
I am sure that I am the ideal person for the club.I would appreciate it if you could accept me.(高分句型三)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.