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【题目】假定你是李华,最近在某英文论坛上看到一名叫Jonah的澳大利亚高中生发的帖子,他提到自己想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧(Sichuan Opera)。请根据所给提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:

1.表达意愿;

2.帮助方式;

3.期待回复。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Jonah

How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going. I'm sure he can be helpful. As for me, I'm a senior high school student as you are. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回一封邮件给想结交一位中国朋友以便学习川剧的澳大利亚高中生Jonah,告知他你愿意帮助他学习川剧。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时

结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:1. 表达意愿;

2. 帮助方式;

3. 期待回复。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

show love forhelp sb. do sth.work asas well asget along well with

第三步:连词成句

1. It's very interesting that you, an Australian, show so much love for our local pride, Sichuan Opera!

2. I'd like to be your friend and help you realize your dream, for my dad is working as an actor in one of the Sichuan Opera theaters in Chengdu.

3. My dad is open-minded as well as easy-going.

4. I believe we have much to share and can get along well with each other.

(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择:either…or…or

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步:润色修改

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Finding a New Spring

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Later that night, the desert guide,3was driving the first cart, saw from the stars that they were getting close to the other side of the desert. He had also overeaten, so that when he relaxed, he fell asleep. Then the bullocks who, of course, couldn't tell4directby reading the stars,5gradualturned to the side and went in a big wide circle until they arrived at the same place they had started from! By then it was morning, and the people realized they were back at the same spot. They lost heart and began to cry about their condition. Since the desert crossing was supposed to be over by then, they had no more water and were afraid they would die of6thirsty. They even began to blame the caravan leader and the desert guide.

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