Question

【题目】据报道2016年全球地表水将面临枯竭的危险，中国同样也面临着水资源严重短缺的问题，请你代表学生会写一份倡议书，呼吁同学们节约用水，防止水污染。

内容包括：1.水的重要性；

2.浪费和污染现象；

3.发出倡议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Save Water, Save Life

Dear students,

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Thank you!

Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear students,

As we all know, water is the source of life. Without water, there would be nothing alive on the earth. But the freshwater available on the earth is becoming less and less. Facing such a serious water shortage problem, we should take immediate action.

First, we should recycle the water we use every day. Second, when we wash up, we shouldn’t leave the water running. And when we take a bath, we may turn the tap down and turn it off in time. Besides, we should spread water knowledge to public.

Remember: Save water, save life. Don’t let our tear become the last drop of water on our planet.

Thank you!

Student Union

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文写作，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】But the freshwater available on the earth is becoming less and less. 运用比较级；I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance.运用了虚拟语气；Facing such a serious water shortage problem, we should take immediate action.

运用现在分词形式作状语；First, we should recycle the water we use every day. 运用定语从句；Second, when we wash up, we shouldn’t leave the water running.运用时间状语从句；Don’t let our tear become the last drop of water on our planet.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。