英语课上.老师要求同桌相互修改作文．假设以下作文为你同桌所写.请你对其进行修改．共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (^).并在此符号下面写出改加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1.每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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13．英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文．假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出改加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
（注意：格式错误不得分，请在答题卷上作答）
A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．In front of a supermarket，five volunteer wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customers in two food markets and all others were collected by 700students from a secondary school．On that day，after leaving the food markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need．Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours．

分析本文提到了我们城市上演的一场演出，号召人们在购物时多多使用布袋而不用塑料袋子．

解答 A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．In front of a supermarket，five volunteer wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customers in two food markets and all∧others were collected by 700students from a secondary school．On that day，after leaving the food markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need．Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours．
详解：
1．去掉to 考察介词．make为使役动词，make sb do sth，所以去掉to．
2．volunteer改为volunteers 考察名词单复数．volunteer为可数名词，five修饰需用复数形式．
3．walk改为walked 考察谓语．根据句式可知，此处walk与wore并列为谓语，所以用一般过去式．
4．less改为more 考察比较级．根据句意，号召人们使用更多的布袋，bag为可数名词，所以需用more．
5．wore改为worn 考察非谓语．此处bags与wear之间是被动关系，做后置定语需用过去分词，worn．
6．在all后加the 考察冠词．前面提到some of…所以后面表示剩余的其他，有范围限制，需用the others．
7．after改为upon 考察介词．upon表示一…就…根据句意此处意为一离开超市就被要求上交袋子．
8．we改为they 考察人称代词．这句说的是顾客，所以用人称代词they．
9．hundreds改为hundred 考察量词．此处hundred为单位量词，没有复数形式．
10．for改为in 考察介词．根据句子意思，表示在仅仅两小时内 in two hours 为固定短语．