Question

【题目】 中国人出国旅游的不文明行为越来越受到广泛关注。请以表格中所列举的事实为依据，写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

不文明行为	你的看法
在公共场所： 随地吐痰 乱丢垃圾 大声喧哗 ……	注意言谈举止 爱护环境 维护中国人的形象 ……

注意：

1. 文章必须包括表格中的提示内容，可以增加细节使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4. 参考词汇：乱丢 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；声誉 reputation

As more and more Chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As more and more Chinese go travelling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The poor behaviors of some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. Since China has become an important part of the global village, we really need to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when travelling abroad. So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind our behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes. What’s more, wherever you go you need to protect the environment. Only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的主题是中国游客的不文明现象，本文与时政有关，关心时政的同学比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、文章的大致内容表格中已经给出了，同学们要根据表格中的信息进行润色，写出一篇完整的文章；2、注意要增加一些细节，以及自己的看法；3、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。

【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。文章使用了What’s more,这样的词来连接文章。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了embarrassed，poor behaviors，have done great harm to ，become an important part of ，get along well，improve China's image等短语和词汇。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如so as to get along well when travelling abroad.状语从句，which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes.定语从句，Only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.倒装句，这样文章才能写出新意。