题目内容
9.Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant.As a single mother of two young girls,my life is stressful sometimes.I love my girl,and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands of a child and a full-time student.Although telling a couple of jokes can't make them to disappear,turning chores into games certainly helped.Getting up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when there is hearty laughter.
Laughter is the best medicine.Last summer the close family member was diagnosed with cancer.The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months to live.But he lived every day to the fullest,laughed and having fun.The doctor said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long.Because of that he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold.
That Robert Frost said,"If we couldn't laugh,we would all go stupid.Laughter may not make all the problems disappear,but laughter softens the blows that could easy bring us down."
分析 本文作者主要从三个方面论述了笑在生活中所起的作用:一、从自身出发,论述了笑是处理任何不愉快的事情的最有效的方法之一;二、以自己的一位近亲属为例论述了笑是治疗疾病的最好的良药;三、引用美国诗人Robert Frost的话,重申了笑的作用.
解答 Laughter is one of the most effective way to deal with anything unpleasant.
As a single mother of two young girls,my life is stressful sometimes.I
love my girl,and there are times when it is difficult to satisfy the demands
of a child and a full-time student.Although telling a couple of jokes can't
make them to disappear,turning chores into games certainly helped.Getting
up in the mornings and getting ready for school are much more enjoyable when
there is hearty laughter.
Laughter is the best medicine.Last summer the close family member was
diagnosed with cancer.The doctor told him that he only had a couple of months
to live.But he lived every day to the fullest,laughed and having fun.The doctor
said it was her appositive attitude that kept him living so long.Because of that
he had much more days than the doctor originally foretold.
That Robert Frost said,"If we couldn't laugh,we would all go stupid.Laughter
may not make all the problems disappear,but laughter softens the blows that could
easy bring us down."
详解:
1.way改为ways 考查名词的单复数 此处指的是:最有效的方法之一,因此这里的"最有效的方法"应不止一种,所以名词way应使用复数形式;故用ways.
2.and改为but 考查句意理解以及连词 本句的意思是:虽然我爱我的女孩,但有时却很难满足孩子和全日制学生的要求;此处表示转折关系,故用but.
3.去掉to 考查固定结构 make sb.do sth.意为:使某人做某事;这里指的是:使他们消失;故去掉to.
4.helped改为helps 考查时态以及主谓一致 此处在句中作谓语,根据本段使用了一般现在时可知,这里讲述的是在通常情况下会发生的一些状况,故此处也应使用一般现在时;由于主语为动名词短语turning chores into games,故谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式;故用helps.
5.the改为a 考查不定冠词 此处用来修饰名词短语close family member,表示泛指:一位近亲属;故用不定冠词a.
6.laughed改为laughing 考查现在分词 此处在句中作伴随状语,由于动词laugh与其逻辑主语 he 构成主谓关系,故用现在分词laughing.
7.her改为his 考查人称代词的一致性 此处用来修饰"appositive attitude",根据上文作者提到自己的一位近亲属用的是he可知,这里指的应是:他的积极的态度;故用his.
8.much改为many 考查much more与many more的用法区别 much more只能修饰不可数名词;many more只能修饰可数名词复数;此处用来修饰 days;故用many.
9.That改为As 考查句意理解 本句的意思是:正如Robert Frost 所说的;故用As.
10.easy改为easily 考查副词 此处用来修饰动词bring;故用副词easily.
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.