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15．据报道，2016年里约热内卢奥运会将选拔约十万志愿者为之服务．请你以"Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers"为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么．短文应包括下表中的内容：

Dos	Don'ts
1．待人礼貌、友好	1．避免不得体的言行
2．坚守岗位	2．不忘履行自己的职责
3．介绍巴西历史和文化	3．不损害祖国的形象
如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么．        （内容由考生自己拟定）

注意：1．对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥
      2．字数120左右．短文中已写好了的部分，不计入词数
      3．参考词汇：形象--image
Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers
It is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2016 Olympic Games in Rio．What should the volunteers do and what should they not do？

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息以"Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers"为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么．，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从Dos和Don'ts两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Firstly首先，Secondly其次，Thirdly第三，make friends with与…交朋友，besides另外，
Firstly，they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world，and avoid improper behaviour．（高分句型一）
Secondly，they should stick to their posts，offering good services，satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty，and never fail to do their duty．（高分句型二）
Thirdly，they should introduce the Chin ese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland．（高分句型三）

解答 It is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2016 Olympic Games in Rio．What should the volunteers do and what should they not do？
    Firstly，they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world，and avoid improper behaviour．（高分句型一）Secondly，they should stick to their posts，offering good services，satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty，and never fail to do their duty．（高分句型二）Thirdly，they should introduce the Chin ese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland．（高分句型三）
    If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer，besides the above，I will work hard and creatively，but never be lazy．I will follow the law and disciplining，but never break them．I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors，and help make the 2016 Olympic Games a great success．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．