假如你是李华.正在一所美国学校学习英文．你对学校的周末音乐俱乐部(Music Club at Weekend)很感兴趣.决定申请加入．现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信.内容如下:1．表示有意加入 2．介绍英语特长 3．说明性格优势 4．期待满意答复注意:1．词数120 左右 2．可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯Dear Sir/Madam.I'm Li Hua.a 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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20．假如你是李华，正在一所美国学校学习英文．你对学校的周末音乐俱乐部（Music Club at Weekend）很感兴趣，决定申请加入．现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，内容如下：
1．表示有意加入
2．介绍英语特长
3．说明性格优势
4．期待满意答复
注意：1．词数120 左右 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English course at our school．

分析本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息对学校的周末音乐俱乐部（Music Club at Weekend）很感兴趣，决定申请加入．现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：表示有意加入；介绍英语特长；说明性格优势；期待满意答复2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达take the English course上英文课，if possible如果可能的话，be good at 擅长，play the piano弹钢琴，above all最重要的是，Look forward to 盼望
I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）
I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）
As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English course at our school．I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）Also I can sing Chinese fork songs very well．As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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11．If penicillin ______ available，many people _______ from sickness or even small wounds．（　　）

	A．	weren't； would die		B．	weren't； will have died
	C．	hadn't been； would die		D．	hadn't been； would have died

8．It was with his iron-fist approach_______ crimes in the southern state _______the 70-year-old man built a political name．（　　）

	A．	to fighting，where		B．	of fighting，that
	C．	of fighting，where		D．	to fighting，that

15．据报道，2016年里约热内卢奥运会将选拔约十万志愿者为之服务．请你以"Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers"为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么．短文应包括下表中的内容：

Dos	Don'ts
1．待人礼貌、友好	1．避免不得体的言行
2．坚守岗位	2．不忘履行自己的职责
3．介绍巴西历史和文化	3．不损害祖国的形象
如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么．（内容由考生自己拟定）

注意：1．对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥
2．字数120左右．短文中已写好了的部分，不计入词数
3．参考词汇：形象--image
Dos and Don'ts for the 2016 Olympic Volunteers
It is reported that about 100，000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2016 Olympic Games in Rio．What should the volunteers do and what should they not do？

5．随着现代社会的飞速发展，越来越多的人喜欢网上购物（shopping online）．请你根据表格提示的信息点，以"The advangtages and disadvantages of online shopping"为题，写一篇短文，说明网购的优点和缺点，并发表自己的观点．
1．语言连贯，句式规范，字迹工整．
2.100--120词左右．
3．要点齐全．
4．参考词汇 1．商品 goods 2．退货 return the goods

优点	缺点	你的观点
1．不出门就可以逛商店 2．买到当地没有的商品 3．价格低	1．有时实物和图片相差很大 2．衣服不能试穿 3．退货不方便

12．What big your house is!

9．Dear Amy，
My husband is a loving，creative and sensitive person who is 15years my senior．（I am in my mid-30s．）
Now I still struggle with my ups and downs，and he is still broke．I have continually asked my husband to get a job．I know he's trying，but even a part-time job at a convenience store would make ends meet．His former profession as a freelance（自由职业的） producer dropped off with the economy，and while he tries hard to find work in his field，he is extremely unwilling to accept the fact that he may need to get a"regular"job．
I love him very much，but I can't continue to keep my frustration（沮丧）bottled up．I tell myself I'm going to leave him if he doesn't find work，but I really want to stay together．How should I handle this？
Round the Bend
Dear Round，
Having been a freelancer for many years，I assure you （and him） that the true meaning of freelancing is that you have the freedom to accept a variety of jobs，as well as the responsibility to make a living between jobs．Freelancers teach，tend bar，sell things door to door and do anything it takes to bring home the money．Volunteering is also a wonderful way to keep busy and meet new people．
Amy
Dear Amy，
"Joan"was a 50-year-old reader who wants to spend her parents'gift （money） on a trip to India．Her retirement fund（退休金） is less than half of what she will need for retirement．It's also clear that she hasn't budgeted monthly for car repairs and other out-of-pocket expenses．In your answer，you encourage her to go．
She's 50and the clock is ticking!How will she feel about the trip she took when she turns 70when she can't afford to retire？Maybe there are other ways she can experience Indian food，culture，history and art without spending the entire sum of money．When her"health slows her down．"she may wish she had kept a rainy-day fund．
Realistic Reader
Dear Realistic，
Your argument is very logical and realistic，but there are also times when you have to go for it．I hope she does．
Amy

32．Who might be Amy？D
A．A reporter of a health magazine．
B．A kind-hearted friend of Joan's．
C．An advisor offering people career advice．
D．An editor of"Ask Amy"section of a magazine．
33．What makes Miss Round so upset？C
A．Her husband doesn't love her as much as when they met．
B．Her husband doesn't earn enough money to support the family．
C．Her husband fails to take the responsibility of feeding his family．
D．Her husband has a hard time finding a"regular"job in his former field．
34．Amy suggested JoanA．
A．go for her dream of traveling to India
B．experience Indian culture at home
C．save money for retirement
D．refuse her parents'gift money
35．According to Realistic Reader，when Joan retires she would feelB about her trip if she took it now．
A．worthwhile
B．regretful
C．excited
D．sad．

10．Would it surprise you to learn that，like animals，trees communicate with each other and pass on their wealth to the next generation？
UBC Professor Simard explains how trees are much more complex than most of us ever imagined．Although Charles Darwin thought that trees are competing for survival of the fittest，Simard shows just how wrong he was．In fact，the opposite is true：trees survive through their co-operation and support，passing around necessary nutrition"depending on who needs it"．
Nitrogen（氮） and carbon are shared through miles of underground fungi（真菌）networks，making sure that all trees in the forest ecological system give and receive just the right amount to keep them all healthy．This hidden system works in a very similar way to the networks of neurons（神经元）in our brains，and when one tree is destroyed，it affects all．
Simard talks about"mother trees"，usually the largest and oldest plants on which all other trees depend．She explains how dying trees pass on the wealth to the next generation，transporting important minerals to young trees so they may continue to grow．When humans cut down"mother trees"with no awareness of these highly complex"tree societies"or the networks on which they feed，we are reducing the chances of survival for the entire forest．
"We didn't take any notice of it．"Simard says sadly．"Dying trees move nutrition into the young trees before dying，but we never give them a chance．"If we could put across the message to the forestry industry，we could make a huge difference towards our environmental protection efforts for the future．
25．What would be the best title for the passage？C
A．Old Trees Communicate Like Humans
B．Young Trees Are In Need Of Protection
C．Trees Are More Complex Than You Think
D．Trees Contribute To Our Society
26．In Simard's opinion，treesA．
A．depend on each other
B．protect their own wealth
C．compete for survival
D．provide support for dying trees
27．We can learn from the passage thatD
A．"mother trees"are usually of no use to other trees．
B．Charles Darwin had the same thought as Simard．
C．people know much about the complex"tree societies"．
D．if"mother trees"are cut down，the survival for the entire forest will be affected．
28．The underlined word"it"in the last paragraph refers toB．
A．how trees grow old        B．how"tree societies"work
C．how forestry industry develops    D．how young trees survive．

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