Question

6．学校学生会将举办一次题为"LIFE BALANCE"的征文活动，请根据下面活动举办方提供的图片写一篇征文．你的文章必须包括以下内容：
•解读图片内容；
•简单阐述你的观点．
（文中不能使用真实的人名和校名）

Answer 1

分析 本文是看图作文，作文主题明确，即"Life Balance（平衡生活）"，图片左半部分的人穿着西装，几个关键词都与"工作、赚钱"有关．图片右半部分的人穿着休闲，几个关键词与"休闲、娱乐"有关．因此题目中的"Life Balance（平衡生活）"应为"balance between work and leisure"．又属于提纲作文．要点包括：解读图片内容；阐述观点．时态用一般现在时．人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：live a …life （过…的生活），pursue…（追求…），earn moremoney（赚钱），chat with （聊天 ），in spare time（在空闲时间），as far as I am concerned（就某人关注的而言），indispensable（不可缺少的），let alone（更不用说），conducive（有益的），cultivate（培养）．

解答 Nowadays people areliving a much busier life than ever．Life balance，or balance between work andleisure，which everyone is pursuing，seems to be a paradox．【高分句型】Onone hand，people are constantly working overtime，hoping to earn more money．They analyze and handle various data and in the meantime，communicate indifferent fashions．On the other hand，however，they wish to spend more qualitytime with their family members and chat with their friends after work．Inaddition，some of them hope to travel around the world desperately or developsome relaxing hobbies in their spare time．（解读图片）
As far as I amconcerned，both work and leisure are indispensable in our daily life．It isobvious that no one can earn any money without work．【高分句型】Andwithout money，one can't feed himself，let alone enjoy his leisure time．Inother words，work is the foundation of leisure．Nevertheless，as the sayinggoes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．【高分句型】Everyoneshould cultivate some positive hobbies of their own．Whether meeting friendsonce in a while in a club or playing bowling on a weekly basis，theseextracurricular activities can relieve people of their anxiety during work，thus helping them function in a more energetic and dynamic way in the next day'swork．【高分句型】Besides，spending quality time with their folks isconducive to the harmony of the family，as well as our society．（从正反两方面阐述观点）
In conclusion，workhard and play hard!The most important thing is to keep a balance between workand leisure．Only in this way can our life be enriching and rewarding and oursociety harmonious．（总结概括）

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．另外还要注意是否包含了所有要点．