题目内容
10.你的朋友李华最近染上了网瘾(Internet addiction),导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人朋友产生矛盾等问题.请你给他写一篇英文书信,告诉他网瘾的危害并提出一些意见.要求:1.语言通顺连贯,可以适当增加情节.
2.100词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Li Hua,
I am glad to hear from you yesterday.…
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.
分析 这是一封劝告信.."劝告信"是书信的一种,属于应用文文体."劝告信"的主要写作特点是表达得体、简洁,让人能够愉快地接受.要想写好一封"劝告信",通常有以下几个步骤:1.发现问题.收到对方的来信后,首先要仔细阅读信件,以发现信中提到的问题.2.分析问题.发现问题之后,我们紧接着就要分析问题.3.提出劝告.在发现和分析问题之后,接下来就要"对症下药".
亮点句型一:I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.我很担心知道你在网上玩游戏浪费了很多宝贵的时间.本句中that引导的是一个宾语从句做动词know的宾语.
亮点句型二:So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.所以我认为该是你改掉坏习惯的时候了.本句是一个虚拟语气的固定句型 it is high time that..到了某人该干某事的时间了.
解答 Dear Li Hua,
I am glad to hear from you yesterday.As your close friend,I'd like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you.【发现问题】
As we know,the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills.However,our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it.I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.(亮点句型一)Now your grades are going down and your health is going from bad to worse.To make things worse,it has damaged the relationship with your friends and family.So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.(亮点句型二)It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.Good luck!【分析解决问题】
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.
Yours truly
点评 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.