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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was 12, I met Jane in a college, which came to China with her parents. Her parents teach English at that time. We soon made friend with each other. Her Chinese was very well while I had difficulty speak English. In order to help me my English, she spoke as much English as she could when we were together. Before long, I could speak English well but at the same time I also made a great progress in my written English. Unfortunately, a year later, Jane returned home with his parents. And we had been out of touch with each other since then.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要叙述作者12岁遇到来中国的简,在她的帮助下,作者的英语提升的很快。但不幸地是,一年后,简随父母回国,她们再也联系不上了。

第一处:考查定语从句。句中先行词为Jane,在非限定性定语从句中作主语,故用关系代词who。句意:我12岁的时候,在一所大学里遇到了简,她和她的父母来到了中国。故将which改为who

第二处:考查时态。根据句中时间状语at that time可知,用一般过去时。句意:那时,她父母教英语。故将teach改为taught

第三处:考查名词数。短语make friends with sb.和某人交朋友。句意:我们很快就成为了朋友。故将friend改为friends

第四处:考查形容词。well一般做副词,如作形容词时,一般表示身体好。句意:她的中文很好,而我说英语有困难。故将well改为good

第五处:考查短语。短语have difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难。句意:她的中文很好,而我说英语有困难。故将speak改为speaking

第六处:考查短语。短语help sb. with sth帮助某人某事。句意:为了帮助我学习英语,我们在一起的时候,她尽可能多地说英语。故在me后加with

第七处:考查连词。根据前后句之间关系可知,这里为并列关系。句意:不久,我就能说一口流利的英语,同时我的书面英语也取得了很大的进步。故将but改为and

第八处:考查短语。短语make progress取得进步,名词progress为不可数名词。句意:同时我的书面英语也取得了很大的进步。故将a去掉。

第九处:考查代词。句中的主语为Jane,故用人称代词her。句意:不幸的是,一年后,简和她的父母回到了家。故将his改为her

第十处:考查时态。根据句中时间状语since then可知用现在完成时。句意:从那时起我们就失去了联系。故将had改为have

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