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12．假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last week，I had a argument with my best friend．All of us went home with anger，After
finishing dinner，I began to do my homework．Sudden，my stomach hurt badly．My parents
took me the hospital immediately．The doctor said I eat unclean food and I needed to stay in
the hospital for two days，that made me feel worse and worried about my lessons．To my
surprised，my best friend came to see me．She was so worried about me and helped me about
my lessons．We understood it each other better and were back together．Now I have realized
that friendship is very importance to me．

分析 本文主要讲述作者和最好的朋友吵架了，两人都生气地回到家了．在吃完晚饭后，作者的胃疼得很厉害，父母立刻带作者到医院．医生说需要留院两天．第二天下午，作者看到最好的朋友来看作者．她很是担忧，虽然她们昨晚吵过架，但是现在又和好了．作者意识到了友谊是很重要的．

解答 Last week，I had a argument with my best friend．All of us went home with anger，After
finishing dinner，I began to do my homework．Sudden，my stomach hurt badly．My parents
took me∧the hospital immediately．The doctor said I eat unclean food and I needed to stay in
the hospital for two days，that made me feel worse and worried about my lessons．To my
surprised，my best friend came to see me．She was so worried about me and helped me about
my lessons．We understood it each other better and were back together．Now I have realized
that friendship is very importance to me．
详解：
1．a改为an 考查冠词．argument是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指，因其读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
2．All改为Both 考查代词．I和my best friend是两个人，用both，表示"两者"，all表示"三者及以上"．
3．Sudden改为Suddenly 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词．
4．加to 考查介词．take sb．to some place意为"带某人到某地方"，是固定搭配．
5．eat改为ate 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
6．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
7．surprised改为surprise 考查固定搭配．to one's surprise意为"使某人吃惊的是"，是固定搭配．
8．about改为with 考查固定搭配．help…with…意为"帮助（某人）做（某事）"，是固定搭配．
9．去掉it 考查代词．已有相互代词each other作宾语，it是多余的，要去掉．
10．importance改为important 考查形容词．be动词后用形容词作表语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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参考词汇：利润profit；安全措施safety measures。

Dear Sir,

I'm writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

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Yours truly,

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US President Donald Trump's senior adviser Kellyanne Conway has come under fire after picture of her casually kneeling on a couch in the Oval Office was widely shared on social media.

In an image captured by an AFP photographer,Conway appears on the couch with her shoes on as Trump poses for a photo with leaders of historically black colleges and universities.

Wall Street Journal columnist Bret Stephens was among those taking aim at Conway,suggesting that aides under previous administrations would have caused even greater outcry.

"If Rice or Jarrett had sat like this in Oval Office,conservatives（保守党党员）would have screamed themselves hoarse for weeks.Now we own trashy," he wrote.

Trump's predecessor Barack Obama was repeatedly attacked for photos in which he appeared to be relaxing. Critics also condemned Obama for unbuttoning the previous Oval Office dress code that called for a suit jacket and a tie.

The image of Conway was spread widely on social media,with several Twitter users criticizing her for what they described as a lack of respect in the Oval Office.

This is not the first time Conway has found herself at the centre of a storm.She recently came under fire for plugging（宣传）the fashion brand of the president's daughter.

The head of the US Office of Government Ethics urged the White House to investigate Conway after the incident,saying she should face disciplinary（惩戒性的）action.

1.What do we know about Rice and Jarrett mentioned in Paragraph 4?

A. They once screamed themselves in Oval Office.

B. They were both Obama's assistants under previous administrations.

C. They are senior advisers now.

D. They have found themselves at the centre of a storm.

2.What does the underlined word "trashy" mean in Paragraph 4?

A. Of no value. B. Rubbish.

C. Satisfying. D. Precious.

3.Why was President Barack Obama criticized by some social media?

A. Barack Obama didn't make achievements as the US President.

B. Barack Obama was repeatedly seen wearing informal clothes in the Oval Office.

C. Barack Obama preferred Rice or Jarrett to behave casually in the Oval Office.

D. Barack Obama ordered Rice to plug the fashion brand of his daughter. .

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How to write a Letter to Parents

As a teacher, one of the most difficult parts of your job is working with parents. 1. Writing a letter to parents is one way to do this. If you do it properly, this is an excellent way to communicate when you cannot meet with parents face to face.

·Put positive communication in the letter, even if you are writing to discuss a problem. 2. Even if it is difficult, you must find this positive spin（言辞）, because it will make the parents more open to what you have to discuss. The general rule is “start with the good, hit them with the bad, then end on a positive note”.

·Share the problem with the parents. Express your concern and desire to help. 3. Show them through the letter that you want to work with them to find a solution to the problem.

·4. You can ask them to write back, sign a part of the letter or give you a call. If you do not hear from them, you should call them. Be caring, but make sure they got the communication. Remember, your goal is to work together to help their child succeed.

·Consider mailing the letter to the parent, rather than sending it home with the student. Some students will intentionally forget to give the letter to their parents, while others will accidentally or purposely lose the letter. 5.

A. Ask for a response.

B. Respect parents and never quarrel with them.

C. Whenever you meet with problems, you should keep cool.

D. Sending it in the mail makes it more certain that it will be received.

E. Do not place it completely on their shoulders, as they may hate this action.

F. You can do this by pointing out a little progress the child has made recently.

G. With proper communication, however, you can build bridges between the school and home.
19．A ______ has been launched （发起） by the netzens on the Net to ______ unhealthy information which does harm to young students．（　　）
A．struggle； rid ofB．campaign； get rid of
C．battle； rid ofD．fight； get rid of

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