题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,上周日是你的外国朋友Anne 的生日。你本来答应参加她的生日聚会,但是你当时正忙于准备月考,不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救办法。
注意:
1.词数100词左右
2.文章中不得出现真实学校与班级
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Anne,
I am very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you, but the monthly test is around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the test that I forgot the appointment. I hope you understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the test? I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of a happy get-together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology.
Yours
LiHua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文要求根据上周日是你的外国朋友Anne 的生日,你本来答应参加她的生日聚会,但是当时正忙于准备月考,不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救办法。要点包括:表达歉意,说明原因,并提出补救办法。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了宾语从句that I didn’t attend your birthday party last Sunday. it做形式主语 that I missed the chance of a happy get-together.强调I do long for a pleasant chat with you. 及should have come,around the corner, long for,so…that 等词汇。