Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Peter 对科学研究感兴趣，他来信请你介绍一位中国的科学家及其研究成果。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 科学家的姓名;

2. 科学家的研究成果；

3. 该研究成果的意义。

注意：1. 词数不少于 50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I know from your letter that you are interested in scientific research. Do you know Tu Youyou?

Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance qinghaosu, one of the world’s most-effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood. And she volunteered to be the first human subject. It was safe, so she did successful experiments with human patients. She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine that has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.

If you want to know more scientists and their research, do let me know.

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇一封信，给英国网友Peter介绍一位中国的科学家及其研究成果.

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 科学家的姓名;

2. 科学家的研究成果；

3. 该研究成果的意义。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Be interested in; scientific research; Tu Youyou; antimalarial substance ; malaria-fighting; sweet wormwood; volunteer to do; human subject; successful; Nobel Prize; significantly; death rate.

第三步：连词成句

1.I know from your letter that you are interested in scientific research.

2. Do you know Tu Youyou?

3. Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance qinghaosu, one of the world’s most-effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.

4. She volunteered to be the first human subject.

5. It was safe, so she did successful experiments with human patients.

6. She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine that has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.

7. If you want to know more scientists and their research, do let me know.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改