Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校学生会打算组织一次有机蔬菜采摘活动，你的好友 Tom --- 一名交换生听说此事，也想参加。他来信想了解这次活动的具体细节。请给他写封回信。要点如下：

1. 具体时间及地点（本周日上午8:00，红昌农场）；

2. 活动目的（了解有机蔬菜，体验采摘乐趣）；

3. 活动内容：在专人引导下对农场进行参观，探究有机蔬菜的种植；采摘有机蔬菜（黄瓜、西红柿等）；亲自烹饪自己摘到的蔬菜。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：有机蔬菜 organic vegetables 黄瓜 cucumber

Dear Tom,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the organic vegetables picking activity. I’m going to tell you something in details to you, which you must keep in mind.

Above all, it will be held at 8:00 am this Sunday. It is on Hongchang Farm that this activity will take place. In the activity, there will be a guide who helps us pay a visit to the farm. Moreover, we’re going to gain the opportunity to experience the planting process. After that, we can pick some organic vegetables, such as tomatoes, cucumbers and so on. Besides, we will cook the vegetables on our own, which, I think, is the most exciting part.

That’s all I want to say. If you want to know more, just let me know. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份给交换生Tom回信关于有机蔬菜采摘活动的具体细节。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1. 具体时间及地点（本周日上午8:00，红昌农场）；

2. 活动目的（了解有机蔬菜，体验采摘乐趣）；

3. 活动内容：在专人引导下对农场进行参观，探究有机蔬菜的种植；采摘有机蔬菜（黄瓜、西红柿等）；亲自烹饪自己摘到的蔬菜。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

in details ;gain the opportunity; such as

第三步：连词成句

1.I’m going to tell you something in details to you, which you must keep in mind.

2.Moreover, we’re going to gain the opportunity to experience the planting process.

3.After that, we can pick some organic vegetables, such as tomatoes, cucumbers and so on.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：告知具体时间；说明活动目的；叙述活动内容。

2.表示并列补充关系：Above all；Moreover；Besides

第五步：润色修改