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11．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I still remember my middle school life in Yibin．I was then in a school for student from other places．As we were all left home at an early age，we meet lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing，cleaning but shopping by us．However，we seldom felt lonely or helpless．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends，we would play basketball on playground，swim in the pool or going for a picnic in the park．We were living in a bigger family．
We treated each other as brothers and sisters．It has been one year when we graduated，but those memories are as sweetly as ever before．

分析 本文作者主要回忆了自己美好的中学时光．作者是在宜宾的一所为外地学生开办的学校里上的中学；尽管他们当时的年龄很小，也遇到过很多困难，但是都是由他们自己来应对日常的生活；他们过得很快乐，周末，他们经常去打篮球，游泳，还到公园里去野餐；同学之间也都像兄弟姐妹一样友好；尽管他们毕业已经一年了，但是作者认为那些回忆就像以前一样地甜蜜．

解答 I still remember my middle school life in Yibin．I was then in a school for student from
                                                                                                              students
other places．As we were all left home at an early age，wemeet lots of problems in our
                            去掉were                                              met  
daily life．We had to do the washing，cleaningbutshopping by us．However，we seldom felt
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lonely or helpless．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends，we would play basketball on∧
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playground，swim in the pool or going for a picnic in the park．We were living in abiggerfamily．
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We treated each other as brothers and sisters．It has been one yearwhenwe graduated，but 
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those  memories are as sweetly as ever before．
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1．将 student改为 students    考查名词的单复数      根据句意'"我当时在一所为外地学生开办的学校里上学"可知，此处指的应是不止一个学生；故用 students
2．去掉were    考查动词的用法   动词left在句中作谓语，意为：离开；与主语we构成主谓关系；故去掉were
3．将meet改为met   考查时态    由于此处讲的是作者中学时期的生活状况，意为：由于我们都是在很小的时候就离开了家，在我们的日常生活中，我们遇到了许多问题；故用一般过去时met
4．将but改为and      考查连词的用法     此处用来连接表示并列关系的宾语，意为：洗衣服，打扫卫生以及买东西；故用and
5．将us改为ourselves     考查反身代词的用法"介词by+反身代词"意为：靠某人自己；本句的意思是：我们不得不自己洗衣服，打扫卫生以及买东西；故用ourselves
6．在playground前加the       考查冠词的用法      此处的playground指的是当时作者所在学校的操场，故加the
7．将going改为go    考查动词的用法   此处是由连词or连接的表示并列关系的谓语，由于句中含有情态动词would，故此处应使用动词原形
8．将bigger改为big    考查形容词的用法   本句的意思是：我们生活在一个大家庭里；此处并没有比较的对象；故用形容词big
9．将when改为since     考查连词的用法     本句的句意：自从我毕业，已经一年了；when当…时候；  since自从；如果句中有since引导的时间状语，该句应使用在现在完成时，故用since
10．sweetly改为sweet     考查形容词的用法     此处用来修饰名词短语those  memories，意为：但是那些回忆就像以前一样地甜蜜；故用形容词sweet

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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