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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：1．在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have a pen pal，hopefully a girl in the early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine．In my mind，he is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time．With such pen pal，I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

分析 文章大意：本文主要是作者写信来想问，是否可以帮找个一个笔友，她最好是20岁初，和作者有同样的兴趣．她（应该）是一个对旅游，游泳，和乒乓球都感兴趣的人．此外，她最好也有（养）一条宠物狗．和这样的笔友在一起，作者希望我们能够共同分享彼此的经历．这样做会提高自己的英语水平，同时也可以学到更多的关于她的国家的东西．

解答 I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor． I want to have a pen pal，
                    去掉
hopefully a girl in the early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine． In my mind，
                    her                                    similar
he is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis． Beside，
she           interested                                                      Besides
it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time．

With such∧pen pal，I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，
         a
or whichever we have in common． I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning 
   whatever                        believe                                            learn
more about her country． I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

1．去掉for 考查介词搭配．ask表示问问题时是及物动词，所以不需要介词．ask for something表示"请求…； 要求…"．  
2．the-her  考查人称代词． 在某人二十几岁应该用in one's   twenties．  
3．similarly-similar  考查形容词． 修饰前面的名词应该用形容词形式．
 4．he-she   考查人称代词．前文一直提的是"她"--a girl，所以用she．
5．interesting-interested  考查形容词形式．本句中是修饰前面的someone，所以用-ed形式．   
6．Beside-Besides  考查副词．本句中表示"此外，而且"． Beside是介词，意思是"在…旁边"．    
7．such后加a 考查冠词，pal是可数名词，表示"这样一个笔友"，所以要用不定冠词a．
8．Whichever-whatever   考查名词性从句． 从句中缺少have的宾语，所以用连接代词，whichever表示有选择的含义，而句中表示无论什么，没有选择意思，所以用whatever．  
9．believed-believe   考查时态．本文用的是现在时态．   
10．learning--learn 考查动词形式． 句中的learn和前面的improve是并列关系，所以用动词原形．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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1．The turning point of my life was my decision to give up a promising career in business to study music．My parents，although sympathetic，disapproved of music as an occupation．This was understandable，I thought，in view of my family background．My grandfather taught music for nearly forty years at Spring Hill College，and it was only the threiftiness （节俭） of my grandmother that kept the wolf at bay．As a consequence，My parents insisted upon college instead of a music school．
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I used to get up at dawn to practice before I left for"downtown"，upsetting my poor mother by having a hasty breakfast at the last minute．Instead of lunching with my business associates，I would seek out some cheap café，order a mean meal and draw my harmony exercise．I continued to make money，and finally，bit by bit，accumulated enough to enable me to go abroad．The family being once more wealthy，and my help no longer necessary．I resigned from my position and feeling like a man released from jail，sailed for Europe．I stayed four years，worked harder than I had ever dreamed of working before and enjoyed every minute of it．
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A．His family was not well off．
B．He had a good family background．
C．His parents were not fond of music．
D．He modeled himself after his grandfather．
60．What caused the author to leave college and take a job？B
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B．The financial crisis of the family．
C．His ambition for a business career．
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61．It was possible for the author to go to Europe to study music becauseD．
A．he kept practicing music
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11．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每句不超过两个错误；
2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I still remember my middle school life in Yibin．I was then in a school for student from other places．As we were all left home at an early age，we meet lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing，cleaning but shopping by us．However，we seldom felt lonely or helpless．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends，we would play basketball on playground，swim in the pool or going for a picnic in the park．We were living in a bigger family．
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"It's Okay．"he announced．"There's nothing to worry about．"
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 A．His mother left him alone．
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 D．He had just quarreled with the cashier．
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 A．He was always well-prepared．
 B．His presentation was about bulbs．
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 D．He predicted the bulb on the projector would blow out．
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 A．Accidents happen almost every day．
 B．Money is the key that opens all doors．
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 D．Chances favor those who are well-prepared．
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73．themajority
74．theoretical
75．atthebeginning
76．ajouneyman'swages
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78．beinglaidoff
79．Results
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