Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom今年暑假想来山东旅游。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件描述山东的三大名胜(孔子故里、泰山、趵突泉)并发出邀请。

注意：词数100个左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

I am glad that you are coming to Shandong this summer vacation.I have told my parents and they are happy about it too.

There are a lot of beautiful and historic places in Shandong.Qufu is the hometown of the great philosopher Confucius.Many of the major cultural sites are all associated with Confucius. The other place that we must visit is Mount Tai.It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains in China.Ji'nan is also known as the City of Springs.Baotu Spring has the honor of being the number one spring in the world.

I am looking forward to your visit in this summer.Send my regards to your parents.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇开放类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的美国朋友Tom今年暑假想来山东旅游。用英语给他写一封电子邮件描述山东的三大名胜(孔子故里、泰山、趵突泉)并发出邀请。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文要求考生用英语给美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件描述山东的三大名胜(孔子故里、泰山、趵突泉)并发出邀请。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1.得知对方要来山东旅行，感到非常高兴。2.山东有很多历史古迹，曲阜是孔子故里，很多景点都和孔子有关。泰山是中国五大名山之一，济南的趵突泉世界著名。3.期待对方来访。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为：be associated with、be known as、have the honor of、look forward to…等，写作时注意邮件的格式和时态。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。