Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息进行写作。

姓名：余光中

生平：1928年10月21日生于南京，2017年12月14日卒于台湾

毕业学校：1952年毕业于台湾大学

专业：外语

爱好：阅读和写作

身份：诗人﹑散文家和翻译家

成就以及代表作： 其诗文和译著共40多种，获得台湾地区文学界各种重要奖项；其代表作《乡愁》入选中小学课本。被称为文坛“璀璨五彩笔”。

提示词：

散文家 essayist；《乡愁》Homesickness; 璀璨五彩笔 ‘Bright Multicolored Pens’

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor，

It is my great honor to take on the task to write an article about a cultural celebrity. Today, I will introduce a wellknown person, Yu Guangzhong. As a brilliant star in the literary circle, he is entitled as the ‘Bright Multicolored Pens’. He was born on October 21, 1928 in Nanjing and died on December 14, 2017 in Taiwan. With a strong interest in reading and writing, he graduated from Taiwan University in 1952, majoring in Foreign Language. Later, his outstanding talent and diligence made him a famous poet, essayist and translator, honored with a variety of awards in Taiwan. His poem, Homesickness has been selected into the textbook, deeply loved by the primary and middle school students. His achievements and personality have cast a heavy positive influence on people's life, which will be everlasting.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇人物介绍。介绍了：诗人﹑散文家和翻译家余光中。文章的要点基本上都给出了，在写作之前要谋好篇，布好局。注意时态，本文应该以现在时为主，偶尔会使用过去时。在写作时要注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇。

文章首先介绍余光中的出生及概况。以简单句为主，文章简单明了。接着列出余光中的优秀品质时运用with介词+宾语+宾补的形式及非谓语动词的ing形式说明其爱好及专业（with a strong interest in reading and writinghe graduated from Taiwan University in 1952, majoring in Foreign Language.）。用非谓语的过去分词作状语来表明其身份：Later, his outstanding talent and diligence made him a famous poet, essayist and translator, honored with a variety of awards in Taiwan.。再且一个非谓语形式说明余光中深受大家的喜爱（His poem, Homesickness has been selected into the textbook, deeply loved by the primary and middle school students）。最后用一个非限制性定语从句（His achievements and personality have cast a heavy positive influence on people's life, which will be everlasting.）介绍了人们对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，他的作品对人们尤其是中小学生的影响巨大，也表达了自己对此人的钦佩之情。文章内容完整，一气呵成。