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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉（\）。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have learned English for many years, but I don't have a chance speak before foreigners. Last week, I happened to meet the foreigner. He needed my help and I felt so exciting.
On Monday, I went to the flowers shop to buy a flower for my friend, because she was ill. I was going to the hospital to see him. In the shop a foreigner and the boss was having a conversation, so the boss didn't know what the foreigner said. I hesitate for a while, then I came to help the boss. The boss and the foreigner thanked me so many. I felt so happy, because the language when I learn is useful. Since then, I want to learn English well.

Answer 1

【答案】①Chance后加to ②the改a ③exciting改excited ④flowers改flower ⑤him改her ⑥was改were ⑦so改but ⑧hesitate改hesitated ⑨many改much ⑩when改为that或which
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者用英语和外国人交流，感觉很开心，进而下定决心要学好英语。

①不定式符号to漏用。表示 “.......的机会”，用不定式结构做后置定语，表示 “......的机会”故在 chance 后加to。

②冠词误用。此处是泛指概念，故把the改为不定冠词a。

③形容词误用。此处指我感到激动，修饰人，故将exciting改为excited。

④名词单复数误用。名词作定语修饰名词时，常用单数形式，故将flowers改为flower。

⑤代词误用。根据语境 “because she was ill”可知，此处指的是女性，故将him改her 。

⑥主谓不一致。本句的主语 “a foreigner and the boss”，是复数概念，用复数的谓语动词，故将was改为were。

⑦连词误用。两分句之间是转折关系，故用连词but，所以将so改为but。

⑧动词时态误用。叙述已经发生的事，用一般过去时，故将hesitate改为hesitated。

⑨副词误用。表示非常感谢，用 “very much”表示程度，故将many改much。

⑩引导词误用。此处是定语从句，引导词在句中作主语，可省略或用that或是which，故将when改为that或which。