Question

【题目】假定你是李华，最近你发现有学生将共享单车停到了校园内并且上了私锁。请你就此现象，写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上，倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。

内容提示： 1. 共享单车带给人们的便利；

2. 如何正确使用共享单车。

注意: 1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：共享单车：shared bikes

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】My dear fellow students,

Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them. Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem. Hence, shared bikes should be left in public for next users. It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.

Li Hua

【解析】英语倡议书的写法

倡议书属于应用文的一种，由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。一般用将来时或一般现在时。题目常会给出标题、称呼、结尾、落款这四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。这类写作的正文包括倡议的原因和目的、内容以及呼吁。英语倡议书的写法：

1. 引出倡议原因和目的：提倡开展某项有意义的活动，推行某种行之有效的作法。

2. 列举倡议内容和要求：倡议其实就是提建议，倡议书中所倡导的活动具有其广泛性和推广性。

3. 结束语。要表示倡议者的决心和希望

写倡议书时，尽量使用具有感召力的语言，如名人名句、警句，以及对偶、排比等，提高语言的表达效果。

亮点说明：本文一开始用一个长句引出倡导的原因和目的：Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them.以这样的开头，达到开篇点题的作用。

接着用一个由as引导的原因状语句进一步说明共享单车的原因。Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem.

在列举倡议的内容和要求时用一个连词Hence引出一个单句：shared bikes should be left in public for next users.再用一个主语从句说明这种做法的错误性；It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. 其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句。

最后总结时表达了自己的决心和希望。I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.本句中使用了一个由so that引导的状语从句。

总之本倡议书内容完整，比较有感召力。单句和复句的交替使用，主动和被动的交替使用，更让文章丰富多彩。