Question

【题目】Many people in England are angry that drivers park their cars on the pavements. Cars that are on the pavement prevent people from walking safely down the street. They have to walk into the road to get around the running cars. It’s a lot more difficult for blind people to walk around the town if cars are in their way. A spokesman for a charity told the BBC, “It can be frightening for anyone who is forced to step into a road because the pavement is blocked by a van, car or other badly parked vehicle. Imagine you have to step into a road where you can’t see oncoming traffic.”

A survey on parking in Britain found that 70 percent of people want a ban on parking on pavements. A town south of London has already started a system to get drivers to park in a proper car park. Any motorist who parks on the pavement gets a $115 fine. However, many people say the fines do not work. Local people say car owners ignore the fine and park where they want. One woman said there would soon be a very serious accident because of a car parked on the pavement. She wants her town to be like London, which has strict rules against pavement parking.

【写作内容】

1．用约30个单词概括上文的主要内容；

2．用约120个单词就“人行道停车”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

(1)分析驾驶员在人行道上停车的原因；

(2)简述人行道停车给行人带来的不便；

(3)你对解决该问题有何建议？

【写作要求】

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】In England, many vehicles are parked on the pavements, which results in much inconvenience to pedestrians, especially to blind people. Therefore, many people call for more strict rules against pavement parking.

In my opinion, the problem of pavement parking is a universal phenomenon. With people’s incomes growing, there has been a sharp increase in the number of vehicles. Since there is such a severe lack of parking places, many drivers couldn’t find proper places to park their vehicles. As a result, they can’t help but park their vehicles on the pavements.

However, pavement parking does cause much inconvenience to pedestrians, especially to those disabled people. They are forced to step into the roads, which is likely to cause accidents.

To solve this problem, I suggest that more parking places should be built in the downtown areas to meet the need of drivers. Besides, drivers are also supposed to be considerate and not to park their vehicles on the pavement. In the end, one can choose to go out by bus or on foot if he expects the traffic is very busy.

【解析】读写类作文首先需要先阅读材料，然后根据要求进行写作，第一段要用约30个单词概括材料的主要内容，材料主要讲的是在英国人行道停车的问题及带来的不好的影响；然后要求对此谈谈自己的看法，包括以下几点：(1)分析驾驶员在人行道上停车的原因；(2)简述人行道停车给行人带来的不便；(3)你对解决该问题有何建议？写作要注意以下几点：1. 文章主要谈对人行道停车的看法，应适合用一般现在时态。2. 内容要点已经提示，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

【范文亮点】

1. many vehicles are parked on the pavements, which results in much inconvenience to pedestrians，especially to blind people. Which引导的非限制性定语从句。

2. With people’s incomes growing, there has been a sharp increase in the number of vehicles. With的复合结构的使用。

3. To solve this problem, I suggest that more parking places should be built in the downtown areas to meet the need of drivers. 不定式作目的状语以及that引导的宾语从句。

4. In the end, one can choose to go out by bus or on foot if he expects the traffic is very busy. If引导条件状语从句。