Question

6．你在网络上读到一篇关于"九零后"的英语文章，你打算以"Post 90's Generation"为题，用第一人称给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇文章，内容包括：
注意：1．必须包括表格中的所有内容；
2．为了使文章通顺完整，可以适当增加内容；
3．词数：120～150．
Post90's Generation
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．（点明文章的主题）
It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．（九零后的缺点）
At the same time，the post90's generation desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．（九零后的优点）
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．（自己的看法）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于"九零后"的文章．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一 点明文章的主题；二 九零后的缺点；三 九零后的优点；四 自己的看法．
高分句型：
1，．We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．句子里We是主语，和post90's generation是同位语的关系；developing和are living 是并列的谓语动词；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句．
我们九零后生活在一个充满激烈竞争的社会，形成了特别的行为方式和价值观，这些东西引起了人们的关注．
2．It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．句子里It做形式主语，代指 that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．
我们九零后确实有一些缺点．

解答 Post90's Generation
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．【高分句型一】（点明文章的主题）
It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．【高分句型二】Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．（九零后的缺点）
At the same time，the post90's generation desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．（九零后的优点）
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．（自己的看法）

点评 考查开放类作文．
写作文的第一步是审题，即要弄清楚作文的时态，人称和要点，特别是要点，一定要全面，把题目所要求的东西都要列举出来，不要遗漏，同时还要注意要点要贴题，否则会造成跑题的现象．