假如你是李华.看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话水平.她可以教英语作为回报．请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件．(1)表达给她提供帮助的意愿,(2)说明你能胜任辅导的理由,(3)给出讲好普通话的两点建议,(4)提出你学习英语的具体需求．注意:(1)词数:120词左右.开头结尾已为你写好,(2)可适当增加细� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．假如你是李华，看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（ Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报．请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
（1）表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
（2）说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
（3）给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
（4）提出你学习英语的具体需求．
注意：（1）词数：120词左右，开头结尾已为你写好（不计总数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称．
Hi Sharon，
This is Li Hua．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．（表达给她提供帮助的意愿）As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many yea rs．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．So I'm quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin．（说明自己能胜任辅导的理由）Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．（讲好普通话的两点建议）
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking．Hope for you early reply!（提出自己学习英语的具体需求）．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

分析这是一篇关于中英文学习的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表达给她提供帮助的意愿；二说明自己能胜任辅导的理由；三讲好普通话的两点建议；四提出自己学习英语的具体需求．
高分句型：
1．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句； a must 是名词，表示"必须要做的一件事"．
此外，我是中国人，这就意味着普通话是日常我和别人交流的必需品．
2．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．句子里Speaking and listening 是动名词做主语；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句．
听和说对于学习语言是很重要的，通过听和说的练习你肯定能取得进步的．

解答 Hi Sharon，
This is Li Hua．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．（表达给她提供帮助的意愿）As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many yea rs．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．【高分句型一】So I'm quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin．（说明自己能胜任辅导的理由）Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．【高分句型二】（讲好普通话的两点建议）
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking．Hope for you early reply!（提出自己学习英语的具体需求）
Yours Sincerey L i Hua

点评考查提纲类作文．
作文的书写也是很重要的，一般书写的好坏会是得分有五分的变动，如果特别差，降低的分数还要多．所以在高一练字是每个学生必须要做的一件事．