Question

11．In China，people who refuse to allow their houses to be pulled down by developers（开发商） are called"nail households"（钉子户）．A number of them have attracted widespread attention in the press．In one famous case in Chongqing in 2007，a family later nicknamed"the coolest nail household"，refused to move out of their house that they had lived for three generations．Though developers cut their power and water，and dug a 10-metre deep pit around the house，the owner still lived in it．When a local court ruled that the house should be knocked down，the angry owner flew a national flag on the top of his house with a slogan of"the government respects and preserves human rights".85% net users surveyed on Sina．com at that time supported the family rather than the developers．Experts believed the conflict between the two parties reflected a growing dissatisfaction among common people．
Finally"the coolest nail household"reached an agreement with the developers after two years'negotiation（协商）．However，the problem hasn't been done yet with lots of other incidents of"nail households"exposed to the public，and the discussion still goes on．
【写作内容】
1以约30个词概括以上短文内容；
2然后以约120个词就"如何解决发展商与钉子户之间矛盾"的主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：
（1）你是如何看待钉子户现象；
（2）如何解决发展商与钉子户之间的矛盾；
（3）解决两者矛盾有何意义．
【写作要求】
1作文中可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．
时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．
重要短语：receive considerable concerns（获得很大关注），the press （新闻界/媒体），highlight a conflict （使矛盾突出），take an attitude towards（对…采取一个态度），fight against （与…作斗争），confront with （使面临），deal with （处理），be supposed to do （应该做某事…），be subject to （服从），makes sense （有意义，有道理），keep sb from doing（阻止某人做某事），carry out （实施），beyond doubt （毫无疑问），build up a harmonious society （构建一个和谐社会）．
【高分句型】
1．The Chongqing incident about"nail households"which have received considerable concerns in the press，highlights an increasing conflict between common people and developers．
这里是由which引导的定语从句，现行词是the Chongqing incident about"nail households"，which在定语从句中作主语．整个句子的谓语动词是highlight，主语为the Chongqing incident about"nail households"，宾语为an increasing conflict between common people and developers．
2．the reason why the nail households fight against developers is that the public interests sometimes confront with private properties．
这里是固定句型"The reason why…is that…"，在整个句子中is为谓语动词，主语为the reason，why引导的是定语从句，先行词为the reason，why在从句中作原因状语，that引导的从句作表语．

解答 The Chongqing incident about"nail households"which have receivedconsiderable concerns in the press，highlights an increasing conflict between common people anddevelopers．【高分句型】Most people take a sympatheticattitude towards those"nail households"． （概括）
The conflict between"nail households"and developers has been broughtinto focus．From my perspective，the reason why the nail households fight against developersis that the public interests sometimes confront with private properties．【高分句型】If this issue isn't dealt with properly，the goal of harmonioussociety can't be achieved．（看待钉子户的观点）
Therefore，drastic measures should be taken to undo this problem．
First of all，developers are supposed to contact with the owners of thehouses which are subject to demolishment． It makes sense if developers visit one home after another to settlewith the payment．To hammer down their house only with a piece of notice could onlyupgrade the conflict．In addition，the local government is responsible to the personal safety of the weakpart，keeping them from being attacked，and making sure that the negotiation is carried out inpeaceful and willing way．【高分句型】In brief，there is still a lot to doto help solve the problem．（解决方法）
It's beyond doubt that the incidents of"nail households"have brought alarge quantity of unfavorable consequences on building up a harmonious society．Welfare of one family can mirrorthe progress of a society．Only by lessening the confrontation of nail households can welive together happily．【高分句型】（意义）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．