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14.现在,很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语.你的英语笔友李平也是如此.最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退.请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议.
写作要点:
    1.简述过度使用耳机的现象;
    2.分析过度使用耳机的危害;(至少两点)
    3.提出你的建议.(至少两条)
注意:
    1.要点齐全,可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯;
    2.字数120左右.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
    3.可能用到的词汇:
过度使用耳机overuse earphone;  注意力不集中less concentration;  记忆力减退bad memory
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday
 ____________________________________________________________________      
Best wishes.
                                                                     Lin Tao.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息现在,很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语.你的英语笔友李平也是如此.最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退.请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:简述过度使用耳机的现象;分析过度使用耳机的危害;(至少两点)提出你的建议.(至少两条)2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:spend too much time doing…花费太多时间做某事;result in 导致;concentration on 集中注意力于…;for instance 例如
 As for your trouble with ears and bad memory,I'm afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones.(高分句型一)
In fact,listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study.(高分句型二)
However,if you do need to use an earphone,you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Li Ping,
      I received your letter yesterday.Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.
      As for your trouble with ears and bad memory,I'm afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones.(高分句型一)In fact,listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study.(高分句型二)Besides,the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.
     There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English.For instance,a recorder or a radio may be a good choice.However,if you do need to use an earphone,you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day.(高分句型三)I hope things will get better soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                             Best wishes.
                                                                                                                                                                                                Lin Tao

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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