题目内容
4.寒假将至,学生外出时可能出现的安全问题受到了广泛关注.请你写一篇演讲稿,呼吁同学们外出时注意个人安全,文章内容需包括:1.说明外出时可能出现的安全问题;
2.提出建议(至少两条).
要求:1.字数100左右;
2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 这是一篇给材料作文,本文只给出了主要写作要点.写作中要注意从两个方面进行叙述,并自己补充一到两点.动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题.注意不要遗漏要点,做到语句通顺.写作中注意使用连接词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
亮点句型一:The winter vacation is coming.寒假快到了.本句用了现在进行时表将来时,be coming.
亮点句型二:If we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.如果我们有危险,我们必须及时报警,以便我们能保持安全.if在句中引导了一个条件状语从句,主句中so that 引导的是目的状语从句.
解答 The winter vacation is coming.(亮点句型一)Many of my classmates make their plans.As teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?When going out during vacation period,what should we do to guarantee the safty of ourselves?First,take some important things with you:your ID card,your mobile phones,your keys to your door,some money.Focus the weather in a week in advance to decide what to take.Then watch out for dangerous strangers.If we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.(亮点句型二)Secondly we should be careful when we make friends.The last one point is to enjoy ourselves.In short,safety must come first!
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
Waiting to feel 100% ready or sure is the (45)C way in which we cheat ourselves out of wonderful life experiences.I challenge you to (46)D free yourself from this self-limiting state of mind.Book that plane ticket,even if you feel lots of (47)A.Sign up for that educational course,even if you have no idea(48)A it will go.Trust me when I tell you it will all come together for the (49)B.
When you meet your dreams with (50)C,when you meet them with mental and physical devotion,you (51)D your trust in the act of LIVING.You make your dreams a (52)B instead of line items on a list.And that's good because your dreams are (53)A to be experiences.You have to(54)D them out in the real world to know if they're possible and worthwhile adventures in the long run.
As you (55)C on this new journey of living,remember that some people around you will naturally be taken aback.But as long as you aren't hurting them,you don't owe them anything that takes away your power to move forward with your life.
36.A.Something | B.Nothing | C.Anything | D.Everything |
37.A.never | B.always | C.occasionally | D.forever |
38.A.despite | B.for | C.from | D.after |
39.A.impossible | B.unknown | C.beautiful | D.true |
40.A.help | B.cheat | C.talk | D.get |
41.A.improve | B.remove | C.increase | D.challenge |
42.A.offer | B.give | C.allow | D.owe |
43.A.excuse | B.decision | C.sacrifice | D.profits |
44.A.refuse | B.grasp | C.admit | D.confirm |
45.A.hardest | B.bitterest | C.easiest | D.dullest |
46.A.automatically | B.casually | C.vainly | D.consciously |
47.A.uncertainty | B.comfort | C.anxiety | D.hopelessness |
48.A.how | B.when | C.why | D.whether |
49.A.worse | B.better | C.closer | D.deeper |
50.A.difficulty | B.doubt | C.intention | D.success |
51.A.carry | B.remove | C.experience | D.invest |
52.A.reality | B.priority | C.burden | D.relief |
53.A.meant | B.listed | C.realized | D.entitled |
54.A.check | B.bring | C.work | D.test |
55.A.wander | B.rest | C.progress | D.hesitate |