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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
   Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote about 480 books，among those his best known work was his science fiction stories．He was born in Russia in January 2，1920．When he was three year old，he moved to New York City with his parents．In 1941，he gained his Master's degree in chemistry．From 1942 to 1945，he works as a junior chemist at the Philadelphia Navy Yard．It was Asimov's extraordinary imagination and amazing mind made him a great writer．Throughout his life，Asimov received much awards，both for his science fiction books and his science books，and unfortunately on April 6，1992，Asimov dead as a result of an HIV infection that he had got from a blood transfusion nine years early．

分析 艾萨克•阿西莫夫是美国的科学家兼作家．他写过大约480本书，其中最有名的作品还是他的科幻小说．阿西莫夫超凡的想象力使他成为一位伟大的作家．他于1920年1月2日出生在俄罗斯；1992年4月6日死于纽约．他是因为九年前的一次输血中感染了艾滋病毒而去世的．

解答 Isaac Asimov was an American scientist and a writer who wrote about 480 books，among those his best known work was his science fiction stories．He was born in Russia in January 2，1920．When he was three year old，he moved to New York City with his parents．In 1941，he gained his Master's degree in chemistry．From 1942 to 1945，he works as a junior chemist at the Philadelphia Navy Yard．It was Asimov's extraordinary imagination and amazing mind∧made him a great writer．Throughout his life，Asimov received much awards，both for his science fiction books and his science books，and unfortunately on April 6，1992，Asimov dead as a result of an HIV infection that he had got from a blood transfusion nine years early．
详解：
1．去掉a；考查冠词，an American scientist and a writer 意为"一位科学家和一位作家"指两个人；an American scientist and writer意为"一位科学家兼作家"指同一个人，结合句意此处要把不定冠词a去掉． 
2．those改为which；考查定语从句，这是一个定语从句，关系代词前面有介词among，先行词480books指物，故关系代词只能用which．
3．in改为on；考查介词，具体点在某一天时要用介词on．
4．year改为years；考查名词单复数，前面有three修饰，故year用复数形式．
5．works改为worked；考查动词的时态，本文讲述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时．
6．made前面加that；考查强调句型，分析句子结构发现这是一个"It is/was+被强调部分+that从句"的强调句型，其中的that不能省略．
7．much改为many；考查近义词辨析，much修饰不可数名词，满意修饰可数名词的复数形式，此处awards是复数形式，故用many．
8．and改为but；考查连词，分析句意为"但是不幸的是…"前后文之间为转折关系，故用连词but．
9．dead改为died；考查谓语动词，分析句子成分可知此处缺少谓语动词，dead是形容词，意为"死的"，又因动作发生在过去，故用动词die的过去式died．
10．early改为earlier；考查固定用法，earlier用于一个时间段的后面，表示"多长时间之前"．

点评 通过快速阅读短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子间的结构关系，从词义，词性，固定短语，句式结构等方面去找文中存在的错误加以修改．

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