Question

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Responsibility is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be responsible when they are very young. At schools, the students are also instructed to be responsible.

In fact, responsibility can be understood in many ways. For parents, they have had the responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their babies; for teachers, both in kindergartens and colleges, they also should be responsible for the study and life of their students, that is to say, teachers are the second parents of children to some extent; for us, to promote a better relationship with our friends, we bear the responsibility for helping our friends when they are in trouble or faced with difficulties.

【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词就“责任心”谈谈你的认识，内容包括：

(1) 责任心的重要性，并举例说明缺乏责任心的影响。

(2) 你认为该如何做一个有责任心的中学生？

注意：1. 可以用自己亲身的经历、虚构的故事或生活中的事例，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

The passage mainly tells us that we Chinese put high value on responsibility and that people have different responsibility depending on their roles.

Responsibility is essential to our life. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. Without responsibility, however, you’ll be an annoyance and can’t achieve what you desire. For example, some students don’t work hard or even skip classes. Worse still, some are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet, which has negative effects on their study.

As students, we ought to be responsible for whatever we do. Above all, great efforts should be made to improve our study and repay the love and care of our parents and teachers. Besides, we must develop a strong sense of responsibility, such as helping others in trouble. Only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.

【解析】

试题分析：本文为读写任务型作文，提供英文阅读材料。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要对所给的材料进行归纳，要注意归纳文章的时态和人称以及30字左右的字数要求。接着第二部分的120字左右要求里，要对材料的“责任心”主题从其重要性以及缺乏责任心所产生的影响两方面进行阐述，最后结合自身阐述如何做一有责任心的中学生。整篇文章对学生的语言表达有一定的能力要求。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，首先在概括上语言精练，言简意赅使用了宾语从句的并列表达等复合从句的表达等，如：you’ll be an annoyance and can’t achieve what you desire；此外还运用了Being responsible, you will gain many precious things等非谓语动词结构以及which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：however，Worse still ，Besides， Above all 等等。

考点：读写任务型写作