题目内容
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jane,
I'm glad to hear from you.You asked me about some Chinese social customs,and now I will tell you anything about it.
Firstly,we greet to each other by saying"Hello"or ask such questions as"Are you busy?"to express our care.Secondly,when praising,we reply with"I am over-praised"to show good manners.Final,when receiving a gift,we say"It is unnecessary"besides"Thanks"to show polite.As the saying goes,when in Rome,do as the Romans do.I'm sure you will enjoy you in China if you took notice of some basic customs.
I hope that is mentioned above might be helpful and wish you good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本文主要是作者向Jane介绍一些中国的习俗.比如:表达关心时用"你好!"或"你忙吗?";表达对赞扬的反应是"我被过多赞扬了";收到礼物时用"谢谢!"或"这是不必的."表达等.
解答 Dear Jane,
I'm glad to hear from you.You asked me about some Chinese social customs,and now I will tell you anything about it.
Firstly,we greet to each other by saying"Hello"or ask such questions as"Are you busy?"to express our care.Secondly,when praising,we reply with"I am over-praised"to show good manners.Final,when receiving a gift,we say"It is unnecessary"besides"Thanks"to show polite.As the saying goes,when in Rome,do as the Romans do.I'm sure you will enjoy you in China if you took notice of some basic customs.
I hope that is mentioned above might be helpful and wish you∧good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.详解:
1.anything改为something 考查不定代词.something用于肯定句,anything用于否定句或疑问句.此处是肯定句,用something.
2.去掉to 考查词语用法.greet是及物动词,后接宾语时不需要介词to.
3.ask改为asking 考查动名词.介词by后接动词时用动名词形式,saying和asking通过or连接,都要用动名词形式.
4.praising改为praised 考查过去分词.we与praise之间是动宾关系,用"when+过去分词"结构作状语.
5.Final改为Finally 考查副词.当与firstly,secondly等表示顺序连用时,要用副词形式.
6.polite改为politeness 考查名词.show是及物动词,后接名词作其宾语.
7.you改为youself 考查代词.enjoy oneself意为"过得快活,感到愉快",是固定搭配.
8.took改为take 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
9.that改为what 考查连词.分析句子结构,hope后的宾语从句缺少主语,用what作主语,同时引导宾语从句.
10.加a 考查冠词.journey是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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