Question

5．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
"We live in Beijing where 175days of the year are smogs，and I fear that my daughter will ask me one day'What is blue sky？'As a mother and journalist，I needed to ask where smog comes from and what we can do．"
Chai Jing，a former CCTV journalist said on the release of her documentary Under the Dome（穹顶之下）．When her unborn daughter was diagnosed as having tumor（肿瘤），possibly as a result of the air pollution，Chai left CCTV and decided to make the video using her own money．The documentary，released for free online viewing on March 1，2015，was watched more than 150million times by March 3．
In the documentary，Chai talked to scientists and researchers and concluded that the burning of coal and oil is mainly to blame for the country's severe smog．She also explored the consequences of the air pollution and ways to solve it．
The 100-minute video，which has been widely spread online，has won both praise and criticism．Some say it has helped raise the awareness of ordinary Chinese and mobilized them to live simply to help reduce the air pollution while others argue over the correctness of the results given by Chai after a series of experiments．

写作内容
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"雾霾"谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你对柴静的行为有何评价；
（2）雾霾给你的生活或学习带来的影响；
（3）你认为普通公民怎样做才能有助于减轻雾霾．
写作要求
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．
ChaiJing，a Chinese journalist，recently released her self-funded documentary，inwhich she explored the causes and effects of smog in China and suggested some solutions．The documentary spread quickly online，arousing both applause and criticism．
Iadmire Chai greatly for she made the video independently by selecting thetopic，doing the research and organizing the reports at her own expense．Neverwill we know how much effort and risks it took her to produce such an appealingdocumentary．
Sadly，I am also one of the victims of smog when it comes to the consequences broughtby smog．Last semester I suffered from a nose problem which made it difficultfor me to breathe especially after exercise．Having seen the doctor quite a fewtimes，I became aware that the smoggy weather was held responsible for mymisery．
Severeas smog is，there are a number of things that can be done to reduce it andevery one of us ordinary citizens can help address the problem．Forone thing，we can decrease energy use by turning off the electrical appliancesin our houses if possible．For another，knowing that the emissions from carscontribute greatly to smog，we should choose walking，cycling，car pooling orpublic transportation instead of driving unnecessarily．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：releasesth  （发布…），arousesth  （激起，引起…），admire sb greatly for…（因…钦佩某人），whenit comes to…（当谈到，涉及到…），suffer from…（遭受…），at one's own expense（某人自费），be responsiblefor…（对…负责），addressthe problem （解决问题），contributeto（导致，促成）．

解答 ChaiJing，a Chinese journalist，recently released her self-funded documentary，inwhich she explored the causes and effects of smog in China and suggested some solutions．【高分句型】The documentary spread quickly online，arousing both applause and criticism．（概括）
Iadmire Chai greatly for she made the video independently by selecting thetopic，doing the research and organizing the reports at her own expense．【高分句型】Never will we know how much effort and risks ittook her to produce such an appealing documentary．【高分句型】（对柴静行为的评价）
Sadly，I am also one of the victims of smog when it comes to the consequences broughtby smog．Last semester I suffered from a nose problem which made it difficultfor me to breathe especially after exercise．Having seen the doctor quite a fewtimes，I became aware that the smoggy weather was held responsible for mymisery．【高分句型】（雾霾对自己生活学习的影响）
Severeas smog is，there are a number of things that can be done to reduce it andevery one of us ordinary citizens can help address the problem．【高分句型】For one thing，we can decrease energy use byturning off the electrical appliances in our houses if possible．For another，knowing that the emissions from cars contribute greatly to smog，we shouldchoose walking，cycling，car pooling or public transportation instead ofdriving unnecessarily．（公民对减轻雾霾能做的举措）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．