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10．Horror filled the heart of the World War I soldier as he saw his lifelong friend fall in battle．Trapped there with continuous gunfire over his head，the soldier asked his captain if he might go out into the"No Man's Land"to bring his fallen friend back．
"You can go，"said the captain，"but I don't think it will be worth it．Your friend is probably dead and you may throw your own life away．"The captain's words didn't matter，and the soldier went anyway．
Miraculously he managed to reach his friend，carried him onto his shoulder，and brought him back．As the two of them got there，the officer checked the wounded soldier，then looked kindly at his friend．"I told you it wouldn't be worth it，"he said．"Your friend is dead，and you are seriously wounded．"
"It was worth it，though，sir，"the soldier said．
"How do you mean'worth it'？"responded the captain．"Your friend is dead!"
"Yes sir，"the private answered．"But it was worth it because when I got to him，he was still alive，and I had the satisfaction of hearing him say，'Jim，I knew you'd come．'"
Many a time in life，whether a thing is worth doing or not really depends on how you look at it．

[写作内容]
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）联系实际阐释"值与不值"；
（2）举例说明你觉得"值"且毅然"做"的事；
（3）阐述这次经历给你的感悟．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．
Risking his life in a battle，a soldier，turning a deaf ear to his captain's advice，insisted on bringing hislifelong friend back from"No Man's Land"despite the fact he was probably dead，which，in his view，was worth the risk．
In reality，there is indeed something seemingly unworthy in others'eyesbut extremely worthwhile to us．Therefore，regardless of what others might say，we go ahead as we hold thebelief strongly that it is worth a try．
This reminds me of an experience years ago．A friend of mine，once mistaken for a thief，was deserted by others，who kept urging me never tolast our friendship．However，I，never losing trust in him，remained his friend before he proved innocent．
Take up all your courage and do something your heart tellsyou to do so that you may not regret not doing it later in life．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：riskhis life（冒某人的生命危险），insistedon doing sth （坚持做某事…），be worth doing/sth（值得），regardless of…（不管，不顾…），holdthe belief that…（持有…想法，信念），remind sb of sth （提醒某人某事），urge sb to do sth  （催促某人做某事），takeup all your courage （鼓起勇气）．

解答 Risking his life in a battle，a soldier，turning a deaf ear to his captain's advice，insisted on bringing hislifelong friend back from"No Man's Land"despite the fact he was probably dead，which，in his view，was worth the risk．【高分句型】（概括）
In reality，there is indeed something seemingly unworthy in others'eyesbut extremely worthwhile to us．Therefore，regardless of what others might say，we go ahead as we hold thebelief strongly that it is worth a try．【高分句型】（联系实际阐述"值与不值"）
This reminds me of an experience years ago．A friend of mine，once mistaken for a thief，was deserted by others，who kept urging me never tolast our friendship．【高分句型】However，I，never losing trust in him，remained his friend beforehe proved innocent．（举例说明觉得"值"且毅然去做的事）
Take up all your courage and do something your heart tellsyou to do so that you may not regret not doing it later in life．（自己的感悟）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．