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4．2014年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学高三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会．假定你是班长李华，以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：
1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注．
2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力．
3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警．
注意：1．词数120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：增强-enhance
How to protect ourselves in campus violence
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very bad results．The incidents of campus violence have drawn wide spread attention in our country．
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection．

Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．
That's all．Thank you．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所提供的材料，写一篇发言稿．以"How to protect ourselves in campus violence"为标题．写作要点包括：1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注；2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力；3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险； 尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：result in（导致），draw wide spread attention （引起广泛关注），deal with（处理），enhance the ability of…（增强…的能力），take appropriate measures to（采取适当的措施），keep calm （保持冷静），try our best to do sth（努力做某事），be aware of（意识到）．

解答 How to protect ourselves in campus violence 
Dear friends，
This year，some seriously violent incidents happened in campus，resulting in very badresults．【高分句型】The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespreadattention in our country．（校园暴力已引起广泛关注）
As a student，we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhancethe ability of self-protection．【高分句型】（要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力）
Of course，if we meet the violence，we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves．At first，we'd better keep calm，judge the situation and beaware of the possible dangers．Then，we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence．At last but not least，we should call the police orteachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury．（遇到校园暴力应采取适当措施）
   That's all．Thank you．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．