题目内容
【题目】星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报的记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
1. 时间与地点:10月27日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
2. 活动的过程:如出发,途中,到达目的地等情况;
3. 你对这次活动的评论。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【答案】To help us students keep fit, our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on October 27th. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8 a.m., we arrived at the foot of Daqing Mountain and began the journey with great excitement. All the way, we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When someone fell behind, others would come and offer help. At around 11 a.m., we reached the top. We jumped and shouted with joy in the sunshine.
This activity was really meaningful for us and we all benefited a lot from it. During the activity we enjoyed nature to the fullest. Besides, we were able to develop our friendships as well.
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求你写一篇报道,内容要点包括:1. 时间与地点:10月27日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);2. 活动的过程:如出发,途中,到达目的地等情况;3. 你对这次活动的评论。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了现在分词短语enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.作状语;还有enjoyed nature to the fullest等短语。