Question

12．假设你是山东某所中学的学生李华，请根据以下提示，向某英语报社投稿，呼吁大家植树造林，保护环境：
 1．过去家乡树木成林；
 2．如今人们毁林种地建房；
 3．气候变化，土地荒漠化，遭受沙尘暴袭击；
 4．植树造林，保护环境，人人有责．
 注意：1．词数：100字左右．
       2．开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
 Dear Editor，
     I'm a student at a middle school of Shandong．_____________________
                                                              Yours，
                                                          Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，用英语写一篇短文，呼吁大家植树造林，保护环境．内容包括：1．过去家乡树木成林；2．如今人们毁林种地建房；3．气候变化，土地荒漠化，遭受沙尘暴袭击；4．植树造林，保护环境，人人有责．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：influence（影响）； attack（袭击）；duty（责任）；in the past（过去）；cultivation（耕作；耕种）；responsibility（责任）
高分句型：1．①Having been deeply influenced by the sandstorm ②which had attacked the northern part of Shandong Province，I feel ③it is our duty to plant trees and protect the environment．
                 ①现在分词短语在句中作状语；②which引导定语从句修饰先行词the sandstorm；③it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语．
                 2．Therefore，we should all know①that ②it's our responsibility to plant trees．
                  ①that从句作动词know的宾语；②it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语．

解答 Dear editor：
I'm a student at a middle school．
Having been deeply influenced by the sandstorm which had attacked the northern part of Shandong Province，I feel it is our duty to plant trees and protect the environment（高分句型一）．There were many trees here in the past，but now people destroy the woods to develop more fields for cultivation．Then，the climate changed and the desertification became serious．Therefore，we should all know that it's our responsibility to plant trees（高分句型二）．

点评 本题为提纲类写作，这类作文一般规定了写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．