题目内容
5.假如你是启明中学的学生王磊,学校计划在校园内开放若干个Wi-Fi热点,并就此通过校报征求学生意见,欢迎大家踊跃发言,你有意表达自己对这一问题的观点,并就此写信给校报,内容包括:1.你是否赞同这一做法;
2.你的理由.
Dear teacher,
I amWang Lei,a student from our school.I am writing to show my opinionfor whether our school should open several Wi-Fisets to the students in our school.
On the one hand I agree to open Wi-Fito us students.For one thing we can search some information without paying,for another,the notice from school can be informed in time by Wi-Fi.But on the other hand I am afraid that this way can cause some problems.For example,some students may play games on line more conveniently,which can lead to their failure in study.So in my view,when opening several Wi-Fisets to students,some rules should be published to guaratee the right way we use Wi-Fi.
Thanks for reading and hope my idea is helpful to you.
Yours
Wang Lei.
分析 这是关于在校园内开放若干个Wi-Fi热点问题的作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一表明书信目的;二自己对这个问题的看法和理由;三希望自己的意见有帮助.
高分句型:
1.I am writing to show my opinion for whether our school should open several Wi-Fi sets to the students in our school句子里whether引导宾语从句,表示"是否";open several Wi-Fi sets to 表示"开放若干个Wi-Fi".
我写信来说明我对于是否应该对学生开放若干个Wi-Fi的意见.
2.For example,some students may play games on line more conveniently,which can lead to their failure in study.句子里 more conveniently,表示"更便利";which 引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句;lead to 表示"导致".
例如,一些学生可能玩游戏更便利了,这会导致他们学习上的失利.
解答 Dear teacher,
I am Wang Lei,a student from our school.I am writing to show my opinion for whether our school should open several Wi-Fi sets to the students in our school.【高分句型一】(表明书信目的)
On the one hand I agree to open Wi-Fi to us students.For one thing we can search some information without paying,for another,the notice from school can be informed in time by Wi-Fi.But on the other hand I am afraid that this way can cause some problems.For example,some students may play games on line more conveniently,which can lead to their failure in study.【高分句型二】So in my view,when opening several Wi-Fi sets to students,some rules should be published to guaratee the right way we use Wi-Fi.(自己对这个问题的看法和理由)
Thanks for reading and hope my idea is helpful to you.(希望自己的意见有帮助)
Yours
Wang Lei
点评 考查提纲类作文.
提纲类作文中通常是以不完整的汉语句子(包括术语或概括性的短语)作为提示形式出现.这样既能够让考生获得命题人所要求的信息,又留给考生一定的发挥空间,因而要求考生具备很强的语言驾驭能力和语篇整合能力.