题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意:1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
【答案】There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.
【解析】本次作文要求考生以李华的身份,根据图画内容,用英语写一篇短文,记述和同学们一起向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。首先要仔细观察图片内容,确定写作内容;其次要写出每个图的要点,再对内容加以充实;最后要审视全文,把握好文章主题,结尾点题。写作时注意准确运用时态,人称(宜用一般过去时、第一人称来写),上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。